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The Awful Moment by Purna (Post Secret Challenge)

Feb 14, 2006 09:19

The Awful Moment by purna
McKay/Sheppard
2,000 words
NC-17
A/N: The instant I saw 20thcenturyvole's Rodney postcard, here (third one down), this story started taking over my brain.

Summary: Rodney's never said "I love you" to anyone because he thought it would sound ridiculous coming out of his mouth.

( The Awful Moment )

challenge: post secret, author: purna

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purna February 14 2006, 19:58:55 UTC

Thanks!

burntcopper February 14 2006, 19:42:13 UTC

heh. Great Rodney, because the absolute honesty of the man... :thwacks Rebecca across the back of the head: Be grateful that he's being honest, woman.

purna February 14 2006, 20:04:29 UTC

Poor Rebecca. I thought of both of them as being horribly inexperienced here, so I cut her some slack on that. I think if she'd been more experienced, things might have gone differently.

Later in life, I bet she thinks back on Rodney with fondness, a little wistful as to how things might have turned out.

neery February 14 2006, 19:57:03 UTC

This is great, and really hot.

purna February 14 2006, 20:06:41 UTC

Hey, thanks! Glad you liked it!

feedback suzy_queue February 14 2006, 21:50:00 UTC

Gorgeous and awesome and hot. Excellent story.

Re: feedback purna February 15 2006, 03:04:56 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!

anonymous February 14 2006, 22:48:11 UTC

Oh wow. Wow wow wow.
That was an amazing story.

purna February 15 2006, 03:05:56 UTC

Thanks!