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Through the Mesh by Purna (Abandonment/Amnesty Challenge)

Jan 13, 2006 12:07

Through the Mesh by Purna (Abandonment/Amnesty Challenge)
McKay/Sheppard
~1,300 words
Rating: R
Summary: The taste of salt and ash.

( Through the Mesh )

amnesty ii, author: purna, challenge: abandonment

Comments 69

birdsflying January 13 2006, 18:29:09 UTC

Then it's quick and rough and almost brutal, but John's mouth on Rodney's shoulder is as soft as his hand is not. <-- I got stuck on this sentence, had to reread it and flail a little before I could move on.

:whimpers a little: But you know, in a good way.

purna January 13 2006, 18:56:16 UTC

Definitely not a fun story to write but it was one that high jacked my head until I wrote it. Gah, sometimes I hate my brain. :)

turtlespeaks January 13 2006, 18:34:27 UTC

*sniff*

purna January 13 2006, 18:57:00 UTC

*pat, pat*

loveanddarkness January 13 2006, 18:38:36 UTC

Ouch.

*Really good* story. Very well written.

purna January 13 2006, 21:56:34 UTC

Thanks! This thing descended upon me the other day. I'm not usually this dark, but it wouldn't let me go.

etben January 13 2006, 18:44:22 UTC

oh, ow. That's painful - good, but painful. It's so scarily probable, too, and, can I just repeat, ow. Seriously.

well done, though.

purna January 13 2006, 21:59:43 UTC

Yes, exactly! I tried to work in a little feel-good wiggle room around the quantum mirror idea, but the John in my head said no way, this was reality for *him* and I could just suck it up.

tingler January 13 2006, 18:49:47 UTC

purna January 13 2006, 22:03:07 UTC

Would you like a quantum mirror lollipop? It's but one of many possibilities.

zee January 14 2006, 01:41:53 UTC

I'll ... I'll take a lollipop.

purna January 14 2006, 14:01:23 UTC

Here ya go. *pat, pat*