Comments | sga_flashfic: "Building bridges" by <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/raven_lore">raven_lore</a></strong> (amnesty/culture clash challenge)

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"Building bridges" by raven_lore (amnesty/culture clash challenge)

Jan 10, 2006 19:27

Title: Building bridges
Rating: R (probably PG-13, but just to be safe)
Category: Threesome
Spoilers: none
Summary: They all work together to build bridges across their diversities.
Notes: For the Culture Clash challenge at sga_flashfic.

A huge thanks to the_green_sheep, _bettina_ and jenlev for their help.

( Building bridges )

author: raven_lore, amnesty ii, challenge: culture clash

Comments 19

adafrog January 10 2006, 18:40:59 UTC

Oooh, Elizabeth. You go, girl!

raven_lore January 11 2006, 19:57:15 UTC

I'm glad you liked it :)

amothea January 12 2006, 09:52:36 UTC

i love your icon, but what is it?

raven_lore January 12 2006, 17:44:45 UTC

It's a little sea otter.

They are amongst my favorite animals and when a friend sent me the picture I fell in love with its expression and had to do something with it. :)

wickedwords January 10 2006, 19:22:30 UTC

Yum! She's doing an excellent job right at that moment, isn't she?

raven_lore January 11 2006, 19:58:41 UTC

Yup, and I love your icon!

mecurtin January 10 2006, 19:23:08 UTC

Do you have more where this came from? Because although I have real problems with Weir/Sheppard or Weir/McKay as standalones (in brief: I think she wants a grownup), they work for me as a 3some.

Another way of seeing I'd like to see your take on their first time. No, it's not *just* because of Liz biting Rodney's nipple while John kisses him

*pants quietly for a moment*

-- but it helps.

raven_lore January 11 2006, 20:03:53 UTC

He! I'm happy it worked for you. I'm not much of a Weir/Sheppard or Weir/McKay fan myself, but the threesome seems just perfect. :)

And even if I don't know how long it will take me to write it, because I am 1) a very slow writer, 2) already working on other stories, you have planted a new plot bunny in my head with that first time request, so maybe in the future there will be more :)

torakowalski January 10 2006, 22:35:41 UTC

Aww. Nice. And yes, I agree with above comment... more would be good *g*

raven_lore January 11 2006, 20:05:55 UTC

:) Thanks, and, as I answered above, more might happen, I just don't know when.

jenlev January 11 2006, 00:56:04 UTC

yay you posted it! ::::twirls you around in a big smoochy hug::: i love how it develops, and how the images unfold to create the whole scene.

and i adore this sentence: "But then he had to turn away, because a smile was trying to ruin his scowl, one corner of his mouth curving upwards, while he tried to force his lips into a firm line." it's very rodney.

:)

raven_lore January 11 2006, 20:11:53 UTC

:::hugs you back and squeezes:::

You know it wouldn't be here if not for your help. Plus your feedback improved it incredibly.

:::hugs some more:::

jenlev January 11 2006, 22:33:06 UTC

yay for more hugs! and good for you for putting this out there and sharing the wonderful glimpse into those moments. :)