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To Sleep with the Lights Off by Purna (Darkness/Amnesty Challenge)

Dec 30, 2005 10:00

To Sleep with the Lights Off by Purna (Darkness/Amnesty Challenge)
McKay/Sheppard
~4,000 words
Rating: R
Summary: Rodney can't remember.

( To Sleep with the Lights Off )

challenge: darkness, amnesty ii, author: purna

Comments 111

temaris December 30 2005, 16:52:42 UTC

This got me completely on edge, and then made me smile. The way you wrote this is just amazing. Just enough information at every stage, and darkness left in the edges. Thank you.

purna January 1 2006, 00:32:27 UTC

Thank *you* for the lovely comment.

z_rayne December 30 2005, 16:56:29 UTC

Oh, wow. Very nice and suspenseful.

purna January 1 2006, 00:33:22 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad it worked for you.

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purna December 31 2005, 03:59:47 UTC

Hey, thanks! I'm just glad to feel the urge to write again.

sweetvalleyslut December 30 2005, 17:18:57 UTC

Great story. I was so anxious for Rodney through the whole thing, and I love the way you developed their relationship.

purna January 1 2006, 00:34:37 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I hope I gave Rodney a good enough ending to make up for the anxiousness. :)

porntestpilot December 30 2005, 17:26:23 UTC

"What's so funny?" he repeated until she shushed him.

*grins* That's a really interesting idea. Programming into your DNA. And I love how John and Rodney are, the thought of Rodney being taken away from him alive almost scarier than the thought of him dying.

purna January 1 2006, 00:36:01 UTC

It's one of those totally sci-fi plot devices, but I couldn't resist. And hey, it is a sci-fi show.