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Shock, by Frostfire

Oct 18, 2005 08:25

“So I still don’t know why we’re here at all,” Rodney said out of the corner of his mouth.

“It’s what we doremember?” John hissed back. “Make contact with new civilizations and see if ( Read more... )

challenge: buildings and food, author: frostfire

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frostfire_17 October 18 2005, 23:39:24 UTC

You are entirely welcome. *g* And thank *you*.

twoweevils October 18 2005, 16:52:37 UTC

Really good job with the voices. I loved the premise - beautiful call-back to Trinity. And the hand-rubbing bit was so nice!

*snuggles Sheppard*

Thank you!
M.

frostfire_17 October 18 2005, 23:47:44 UTC

You're welcome! And thank you for commenting!

*also snuggles Sheppard*

Yay. Glad you enjoyed it.

I just want to say... deannie October 18 2005, 16:57:28 UTC

...that as an anaphylactic sufferer, you did a fantastic job of the OMGWTFI'm DYING!-ness of it.

Because Rodney is so, so right. It sucks. A lot.

And I did love the questioning of the food. I swear, I make a point to ask about whether something has almonds in it, and people think I'm a hypochondriac, so I've learned to stop doing it (or just not eat)...

Until the day I almost had a "full-blown" at work because one of the girls made a cookie that had a grand total of a teaspoon of Heath bar in it. Did you know Heath bars have almonds in them? I sure didn't--until I couldn't swallow anymore.

Beautiful job! Thanks for the angst!

Re: I just want to say... frostfire_17 October 18 2005, 23:57:13 UTC

Oh, wow, thanks. I was really nervous about writing this and then having people go, "uh-huh. That's not what it's like at ALL," but apparently the research paid off. Yay. And yeah, I see how that could be so not-fun, *having* to act like a hypochondriac just to make sure you're okay. *pats you*

So, you're welcome. And I'm really glad you liked it.

isiscolo October 18 2005, 16:59:57 UTC

Oh, this is great! I love the Trinity references, and the voices seem spot-on to me. The feeling of omg, being the cause of someone you care about maybe DYING is just, mmm, owie.

frostfire_17 October 19 2005, 00:45:25 UTC

Glad you liked it! I'm always happy to delive good owie. *g* Thanks so much for commenting!

severusslave October 18 2005, 17:00:52 UTC

Brilliant use of the episode Trinity. !!!

frostfire_17 October 19 2005, 00:45:53 UTC

Heh, that was so a last-minute inspiration, and yet everyone seems to love it. Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!