Voyeurism Challenge (Amesty) (revised version)

[amothea]

Title: The Cell

Comments

[jic]

*meep*

thanks

[amothea]

just writing to say thanks for the feedback. :)

[raveninthewind]

You get a *meep* from me, too.

And a *sniff*.

[amothea]

well a meep is good. :) thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I wasn't sure if anyone was reading the story or not. I'm glad someone gave it a chance.

[raveninthewind]

I was feeling brave so I gave it a try. (I get depressed when I read too much darkfic or angst, so I admit I limit it.) John and Elizabeth are such great characters, and I thought the bit at the ending when the team reacts to the rape was very effective.

But poor John and Elizabeth. Damn evil aliens!

[amothea]

I don't get depressed reading stories unless they are really really bad (in which case it's sometimes really funny or really depressing) or slave fics with no hope for a happy ending, but I know you aren't the only one that feels this way. :) again, I'm glad you gave it a chance. I revised the story a little...i'm not sure if it actually made it any better or more co-herent but if you'd like to read the revised version it's on my LJ. It's still the same story I just re-wrote (what felt like ) a lot of the sentences.

[angel_liam]

oi, that was good! Wonderful fanfic, and also very sad...*sniff* but at least Shep has a reason to do it...*sniff* Keep writing, that was really really good!;-)

[amothea]

thank you for the feedback. :) I really appreciate it.

[angel_liam]

you're welcome;-)
Are there more fanfics out there written by you?

[amothea]

I just wrote another SGA fic for the sga_santa and I have a webpage Amalthia's Corner that houses my fan fics and music videos. Have fun. :) I gotta warn you though some of the fics are my earlier attempts at writing and it's kind of hit and miss...