Beyond The Sea, by Claire - Amnesty Challenge

[moonlettuce]

Originally envisioned for the Enclosed Spaces challenge :-)

ETA: I must have been on the good crack when I posted this, because it was actually the Dangling challenge I started this for.Title: Beyond The Sea

Comments

[temaris]

I still like this. Mmmm. Yes. And mea culpa, mea culpa, mea maxima culpa for not getting the beta back to you in time for the original challenge *g*. All's well though, and all that jazz ;-)

[moonlettuce]

Totally not your fault. I didn't actually get it sent to you until after the challenge closed *g*

[temaris]

I thought you did. Hmm. *swiftly hands guilt back to the Claire*

[alizarin_nyc]

This is very nicely done. Having just watched "Letters from Pegasus" and feeling Elizabeth's pain during the video where she informs the families of the dead, this is a real heartbreaker.

Glad you posted.

[moonlettuce]

Thanks! Glad you liked. I find Elizabeth a lot of fun to write (even with something this serious), so I'm pleased people liked it :-)

[cybersyd]

Just make me cry, why doncha...

Beautiful.

[moonlettuce]

*hands you hankies*

Sorry!

(And glad you liked it :-)

[krazykitkat]

*sniff*
Heartbreaking.

[moonlettuce]

*hugs*

It's bizarre how much I enjoyed writing this, considering it's pretty angsty.

[allaire]

Liked it a lot, especially the lines about Grodin.

A short mistake, though: "that makes suddenly makes her".

[moonlettuce]

*hugs Peter to me and doesn't let go*

And eep! *fixes mistake* :-D

Glad you liked :-D