Crucible, by kageygirl, for the ESP challenge

Jun 19, 2005 19:13

The "extra sensory perception" version...

Title: Crucible
Author: kageygirl
Rating: PG
Summary: What comes out the other side is the essential.

Crucible )

author: kageygirl, challenge: esp

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randommagic June 20 2005, 01:44:26 UTC
Oh this was lovely, well not all the torture John goes through with each step obviously because you described that so well that I felt sorry for Rodney just feeling echoes of it *g*, but the fact that John would put himself through that for Rodney, and Rodney helping him at the end. :)

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kageygirl June 20 2005, 17:37:44 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. *g*

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kalikahuntress June 20 2005, 03:38:00 UTC
I love seeing this side of John, the one who will do anything for his team and doesn't believe in leaving anyone behind. Thank you for posting this:)

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kageygirl June 20 2005, 17:38:25 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. *g*

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wickedwords June 20 2005, 03:47:48 UTC
I loved that Rodney got echoes of what John was going through for him. Really excellent. Thanks.

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kageygirl June 20 2005, 17:41:02 UTC
Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

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nel_ani June 20 2005, 07:48:09 UTC
Oooow. Owowowow.

I *loved* this. *is h/c whore*

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kageygirl June 20 2005, 17:43:07 UTC
I'm glad it worked for you, then. *g* Thanks!

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scribewraith June 20 2005, 08:21:45 UTC
Fantastic. I love the whole depth between that you've conveyed so easily.

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kageygirl June 20 2005, 17:45:26 UTC
Oh, thank you. I'm really glad you liked it.

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