Title: Assent Author: Kylie Lee (kylielee1000) Category: Slash Pairing: McKay/Sheppard Length: 1600 words Rating: NC-17 Summary: Aliens made them do it, more or less.
Re: lovely ;)kylielee1000May 30 2005, 11:12:49 UTC
The jumbled thoughts in John's head gave this story the definite touch of realism
Yes, nothing like admitting to yourself that you want Rodney McKay! I mean, it happens to me daily, but I think Shep was actually surprised, there for a split second.
Loved the sensory stream-of-consciousness feel of this and the urgency it conveyed. And the affirmation and connection at the end was very them. Really well done.
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Your icon has killed me dead. Woo!
Glad you liked...
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*gulp* :D
Plus the "Rodney, you" leitmotif and the last lines, just wow :)
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Yes, nothing like admitting to yourself that you want Rodney McKay! I mean, it happens to me daily, but I think Shep was actually surprised, there for a split second.
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Woo! Glad you liked. Stream-of-consciousness is offputting, you know?
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The last line? Magic. *g*
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No other last line would do...glad you like this thinky little fic!
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