"Assent" by Kylie Lee (slave challenge)

[kylielee1000]

Title: Assent
Author: Kylie Lee (kylielee1000)
Category: Slash
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Length: 1600 words
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Aliens made them do it, more or less.

Comments

[dzurlady]

That last line? Has killed me dead. Awww.

[kylielee1000]

That last line? Has killed me dead. Awww.

Your icon has killed me dead. Woo!

Glad you liked...

[dzurlady]

Exterminate! Exterminate!

lovely ;)

[direaliete]

The jumbled thoughts in John's head gave this story the definite touch of realism, I could almost feel as if I were there!
*gulp* :D

Plus the "Rodney, you" leitmotif and the last lines, just wow :)

Re: lovely ;)

[kylielee1000]

The jumbled thoughts in John's head gave this story the definite touch of realism

Yes, nothing like admitting to yourself that you want Rodney McKay! I mean, it happens to me daily, but I think Shep was actually surprised, there for a split second.

[katyabaturinsky]

Loved the sensory stream-of-consciousness feel of this and the urgency it conveyed. And the affirmation and connection at the end was very them. Really well done.

[kylielee1000]

Loved the sensory stream-of-consciousness feel of this and the urgency it conveyed.

Woo! Glad you liked. Stream-of-consciousness is offputting, you know?

[teaphile]

Wow. I agree with what everyone else has said. Yeah, nicely done.

[kitzen_kat]

Love how the thoughts tumble over each other as John's senses and thoughts get tangled up.

The last line? Magic. *g*

[kylielee1000]

The last line? Magic. *g*

No other last line would do...glad you like this thinky little fic!