"Assent" by Kylie Lee (slave challenge)

May 30, 2005 01:29

Title: Assent
Author: Kylie Lee (kylielee1000)
Category: Slash
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Length: 1600 words
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Aliens made them do it, more or less.

Assent )

author: kylielee1000, challenge: slave

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dzurlady May 30 2005, 06:20:24 UTC
That last line? Has killed me dead. Awww.

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kylielee1000 May 30 2005, 11:12:05 UTC
That last line? Has killed me dead. Awww.

Your icon has killed me dead. Woo!

Glad you liked...

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dzurlady May 30 2005, 13:04:01 UTC
Exterminate! Exterminate!

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lovely ;) direaliete May 30 2005, 06:47:40 UTC
The jumbled thoughts in John's head gave this story the definite touch of realism, I could almost feel as if I were there!
*gulp* :D

Plus the "Rodney, you" leitmotif and the last lines, just wow :)

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Re: lovely ;) kylielee1000 May 30 2005, 11:12:49 UTC
The jumbled thoughts in John's head gave this story the definite touch of realism

Yes, nothing like admitting to yourself that you want Rodney McKay! I mean, it happens to me daily, but I think Shep was actually surprised, there for a split second.

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katyabaturinsky May 30 2005, 07:08:14 UTC
Loved the sensory stream-of-consciousness feel of this and the urgency it conveyed. And the affirmation and connection at the end was very them. Really well done.

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kylielee1000 May 30 2005, 11:14:10 UTC
Loved the sensory stream-of-consciousness feel of this and the urgency it conveyed.

Woo! Glad you liked. Stream-of-consciousness is offputting, you know?

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teaphile May 30 2005, 07:19:22 UTC
Wow. I agree with what everyone else has said. Yeah, nicely done.

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kitzen_kat May 30 2005, 09:02:43 UTC
Love how the thoughts tumble over each other as John's senses and thoughts get tangled up.

The last line? Magic. *g*

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kylielee1000 May 30 2005, 11:14:41 UTC
The last line? Magic. *g*

No other last line would do...glad you like this thinky little fic!

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