"Assent" by Kylie Lee (slave challenge)

May 30, 2005 01:29

Title: Assent
Author: Kylie Lee (kylielee1000)
Category: Slash
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Length: 1600 words
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Aliens made them do it, more or less.

Assent )

author: kylielee1000, challenge: slave

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casspeach May 30 2005, 09:06:14 UTC
I loved the disjointedness of John's thought processes and the way he'd chosen Rodney and he didn't know why except he did really. Nicely written, hot and faintly disturbing with the audience in the background but always there.

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kylielee1000 May 30 2005, 11:15:51 UTC
faintly disturbing with the audience in the background but always there

Yeah, I was really kind of wanting this to come through, the sheer distubring-ness of what they were asked to do always present, instead of it being all "Oh, yeah, sure, we've always loved each other! Ha ha!"

Thanks for this sweet FB-y note!

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nullabona May 30 2005, 10:11:17 UTC
Fantastic! Loved this look into John’s head. Hot, so hot.

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kylielee1000 May 30 2005, 11:17:26 UTC
Fantastic! Loved this look into John’s head. Hot, so hot.

Oh yay, glad you liked...

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kylielee1000 May 30 2005, 11:16:24 UTC
Oh, guh.

I love how you always get what I'm going for. Thank you! You're the best reader evah!

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Meep quine May 30 2005, 10:40:23 UTC
I have nothing coherent to say really. Just

*whimper*

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Re: Meep kylielee1000 May 30 2005, 11:16:53 UTC
*whimper*

Coherence is overrated. (Clearly I think that, and thus this fic, yes?) Thank you!

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misspamela May 30 2005, 12:18:23 UTC
Oh, wow -- fantastic look inside John's head! So very hot and realistic and GUH.

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kylielee1000 May 30 2005, 12:31:42 UTC
realistic

Hmmm...hee! Glad you enjoyed. And your icon is so apropos. Love! It!

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