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Never A Picnic

Nov 11, 2007 10:32

Title: Never a Picnic
Rating/Warning: PG-13 for mild (as in very) nudity, gen
Spoilers: none
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2007, humor, fic

Comments 16

aurora_novarum December 4 2007, 18:00:24 UTC

This was so funny. I think I've lost track of all my favorite parts.

Naked SG-1! Except for Teal'c who was too dignified for such things...at least for a while. Hee. And Daniel's comments about his teammates before being distracted by the insects biting! and then realizing Sam had been checking him out and totally anthropologically explaining it to himself (as I picture a very red face he's very much ignoring).

And Jack being oh-so-not-happy. And Daniel and Sam having their own little hand signal code for the bets.

You even used the silly bubble part of the prompt! OMG! The great spa setting overtaken by the stench. (And so funny they thought it was Teal'c considering CJ's reputation).

And Daniel wearing a kilt (not a skirt, a kilt), and Teal'c wearing every bit of his uniform.

And Jack's joking putting the SFs at ease. And Hammond, as always, being awesome.

Thank you so much, random! I'm a big fan of your stories. :-D

I'm just grinning from ear to ear.

randomfreshink December 4 2007, 20:19:47 UTC

So glad you liked -- I wasn't sure about this (and I have most of a serious story you may yet get about this). SG-Fignewton said you'd love it :) And I had more fun than anyone should writing this.

aurora_novarum December 4 2007, 20:50:26 UTC

A maybe/possible serious story too? *Perks*

Heh, yeah, sg_fignewton share a lot of the same warped tastes. :-) Funny/drama, action/quiet...as long as there's great characterization, I'm usually a happy teamy camper. Heh.

sg_fignewton December 4 2007, 22:05:41 UTC

Whee! You put in the bandana for me!

Told ya she'd love it. :)

randomfreshink December 5 2007, 16:27:02 UTC

Daniel in a bandana for Christmas -- not a bad thing at all.

stargazercmc December 5 2007, 00:12:46 UTC

Oh, this is just so much fun. Love it!

Heheheheheh, giant ants. Nice.

randomfreshink December 5 2007, 16:24:56 UTC

It was either ants, or Glynda-like bubbles to float around in (and I really resisted that one).

supplyship December 5 2007, 23:31:04 UTC

Nothing brings a team together like a day at the spa! :) This was so funny! Loved the Jack-Teal'c stare down and the Daniel-Sam silent bet.

By now, everyone knew that if Jack O'Neill showed up with something stupid to say, then it really was Jack O'Neill. No alien could be that goofy. Hee, so true! *loves goofy Jack*

eve11 December 8 2007, 00:28:45 UTC

This had me cracking up. Poor SG-1! Chased into mud pits by giant ants! I loved Teal'c's meticulous disrobing, and also this part:

"Look at it this way, Jack, people pay big money back home for a soak in a mud bath like this."

"Yeah, and they're idiots!"

bwa ha ha!

randomfreshink December 9 2007, 17:22:46 UTC

Thank you, thank you -- and yes, very bwa ha ha!