Never A Picnic

Nov 11, 2007 10:32



Title: Never a Picnic
Rating/Warning: PG-13 for mild (as in very) nudity, gen
Spoilers: none
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2007, humor, fic

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kalquessa December 13 2007, 19:15:47 UTC
This made me laugh so hard! Hee! Too many good parts to list them all, but I loved the initial race to strip off and get in the mud, and the observations of various team-member's less-frequently-seen body parts. *laughs*

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randomfreshink December 14 2007, 15:48:25 UTC
Yeah for holiday smiles :)
I kept grinning as I wrote this.

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aelfgyfu_mead December 17 2007, 01:11:21 UTC
The dialogue! I was going to quote my favorite lines, but LJ has limits on comment lengths. I was going to cut-and-paste just one line, but then I had to replace it, and then....

I love this team. I love Daniel and Sam taking quiet side bets on Jack and Teal'c's behavior--and observing each other, and the others (except that Sam turns aside when it's Teal'c--hmm...).

Poor Hammond! The two-hour delay was probably wise.

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randomfreshink December 17 2007, 03:43:09 UTC
Yeah, you've got to love Hammond for all he did put up with -- thanks for the love!

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sidlj January 2 2008, 22:14:02 UTC
Oh so funny! Jack was a hoot and I loved Sam and Daniel's secret wagers. Fortunately Teal'c's dignity is always intact. :-D

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randomfreshink January 3 2008, 15:30:55 UTC
Yeah, Teal'c redefines "cool".

So glad you enjoied! Funny is always a tricky thing to pull off.

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