Prompt 74.01

Jun 23, 2009 13:32

Five times Daniel wanted to tell Jack he loved him, but didn't.

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set 74, daniel jackson, jack o'neill, prompts

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Re: Five times Daniel wanted to tell Jack he loved him, but didn't magnavox_23 July 6 2009, 22:07:49 UTC
And Jack said them back.

Eee! Love happy endings. :D

And the first scenario, not enough Cold Lazarus stuff out there.

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Re: Five times Daniel wanted to tell Jack he loved him, but didn't chattycatsmeow July 6 2009, 23:43:13 UTC
oh, beautiful. I love how this shows the whole progression of their relationship, for good or bad, throughout the years.

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Re: Five times Daniel wanted to tell Jack he loved him, but didn't mornincamper July 7 2009, 20:46:02 UTC
I love how you moved every moment through Canon. We all know what he was really thinking there.
This was ouchy and wonderful. and oh, wanting to say them even more after that throw-down...genius. really.

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Almost... cleothemuse July 6 2009, 04:27:09 UTC
I always wanted to tell Jack I loved him, but the time never seemed right ( ... )

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Re: Almost... magnavox_23 July 6 2009, 22:10:50 UTC
Aww, poor Daniel. :(

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Re: Almost... cleothemuse July 7 2009, 00:42:45 UTC
*sigh* I'm not a fan of sad fics usually, but this one just begged to be written.

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magnavox_23 July 6 2009, 13:30:02 UTC
#1. As soon as their lips part. Looking into Jack's eyes and seeing that love reflected back.

#2. As his lips trail across Jack's collar bone, grazing a little with his teeth, tasting Jack's skin.

#3. As he skims his hands under Jack's shirt, pulling it up and gently over his head while Jack remains passive, letting Daniel do as he pleases.

#4. As he kisses Jack's belly, murmuring soft endearments against the trail of hairs which make Jack ticklish and he moves against Daniel's lips.

#5. As he's kneeling in front of Jack, inhaling his musky scent, hands on Jack's glutes, thumbs resting in the hollows of Jack's hips... but by then his mouth is too full.

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lilyleia78 July 8 2009, 00:36:16 UTC
::gigglesnort:: No talking with your mouth full now Danny-boy! ♥

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discodiva76 July 8 2009, 09:45:34 UTC
*iz ded*....wonderful!!!

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sidlj July 12 2009, 06:11:50 UTC
*melts* You can tell him later, Daniel. Pillow talk. :-)

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lilyleia78 July 6 2009, 18:01:55 UTC
1 - Right after the box of tissues came through the gate. Who knew you could miss real tissues as much as double soy lattes and indoor plumbing? Somehow he didn't think the Colonel would have appriciated the sentiment.

2 - When the crystal entity pretended to be Charlie. Jack looked as lost and broken as the day Daniel had first met him, and Daniel just wanted him to know that people cared about him. Purely platonically, of course. But, well, 'I love you in a purely platonic way' didn't seem to hold the level of comfort he was going for, so he offered silent support instead.

3 - At Sha're's funeral. It was Jack's turn to offer silent support then, but Daniel really could have used the verbal reassurance and considered saying it first just to hear it back. But he didn't want to say it and not hear it back. Or, worse, have Jack say it out of obligation, so he stayed quiet ( ... )

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lilyleia78 July 8 2009, 00:29:10 UTC
Canon gives us so much angst to choose from! thank you.

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