This is a story I wrote for my Fiction I class. The workshop is on Monday and I'd really appreciate some early feedback before I finish it. As you could tell, it's not quite finished and I'm still troubled by how I should approach some missing scenes (such as what happens to the stuffed animal). Please read it if you could and let me know what more ( Read more... )

Since I have been going back and forth from home to school during my regular week, I don't always have time to commit myself to the "Word-a-Day" calendar. Many words get passed by, though I collect the ones I don't yet know. It has been said that if you use a word five times in a sentence, it will become part of your vocabulary. Here, I will use ( Read more... )