House fic: Watch Out

May 08, 2006 01:57

Title: Watch Out
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: House/Cuddy
Summary: Cameron held an open file in front of her, but didn’t know whose it was. She watched Cuddy put a hand on House’s arm. She wondered what they were talking about.
Notes: Written for the housefic_pens Kickstarter Challenge #2, the promt was ( Read more... )

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sweetbicoco May 8 2006, 11:09:48 UTC
Wow! Loved the last line :)
And haha I could see all of them trying to watch what was going on inside Cuddy's office.

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severuslovesme May 8 2006, 17:55:54 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing!

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anakisa May 8 2006, 11:12:16 UTC
OMG!
I love you!
I thought of mentioning my favourite part, or something of the like, but then I'd end up pasting the whole thing here.
It was absolutely incredible!

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severuslovesme May 8 2006, 17:56:20 UTC
Thanks so much!! I'm so glad you liked it, it was really fun to write.

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cincoflex May 8 2006, 11:33:42 UTC
What a great slice of life story! I loved the banter and the insight into how each character was reacting to House and Cuddy--bang on characterization and all around great job. Write more--

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severuslovesme May 8 2006, 17:57:03 UTC
Thank you so much! It means a lot to hear you say that, cause I'm a big admirer of your fic, so yeah, that made my day :)

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iwant_sprinkles May 8 2006, 11:38:47 UTC
Absolutely adored it. The characterisation was spot on, and it was nice to have the ducklings feature too. Especially loved the Chase stuff of the ducklings parts. Mostly because I love Chase and you nailed it. Hee.

And that last line! So lovely. :)

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severuslovesme May 8 2006, 17:57:55 UTC
Hee Chase is so funny. I like the ducklings a lot, especially when they're reacting to House/Cuddy. Glad you liked!

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iwant_sprinkles May 8 2006, 18:00:30 UTC
Same with me :) I get the impression Chase isn't that popular, but I love him to bits, hee.

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wynntay May 8 2006, 13:51:44 UTC
Loved the meaningless inner thought of everyone while they waited.
Sounds like me.

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severuslovesme May 8 2006, 17:58:40 UTC
Haha I was going for totally random mixed with the occasionally insightful inner thought - glad it worked for you!

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