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[sevenperseids]

So...edited version of Chapter 1 is posted. :o

I mostly just edited the letters between James and Lily and got rid of a bunch of unnecessarily detailed descriptions. I don't know, I think it's better. Lalala.

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[twinsuns]

I hardly read fan fiction any more, but the new HP movie is making me feel very nostalgic. So I thought to myself, "I'll read chapter one because she's just edited it, and then wait to read the other chapters til after she edits them." But now I'm re-reading the whole thing! ♥

My God. You do dialog so well. Really.

[sevenperseids]

Eeee! Erin! Thanks so much. <3 DH2 is making me nostalgic too - I saw it last night and it made me want to spend the rest of the week writing, haha. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story again!