Chapter 2 is edited!

I think this is pretty much the only chapter I've changed enough to be worth re-reading, if anyone cares enough to actually go back and do that. :P There are some more details in later chapters that don't quite make sense with this rewrite, but those are pretty minor and I can probably fix them in, I don't know, an hour or two ( Read more... )

So...edited version of Chapter 1 is posted. :o

I mostly just edited the letters between James and Lily and got rid of a bunch of unnecessarily detailed descriptions. I don't know, I think it's better. Lalala.

Aaaaand Chapter 1 is edited. Chapter 2 in progress! Woot ( Read more... )