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[sevangel]

Wow, it's been forever and a year since I posted here. I'm still writing like mad but I'm fairly sure I burned out my Rayne muse....I still love to read it but I can't force it out to save my life. I am, however, writing some Buffy/Supernatural fics which brings me to this posting. It's a sneak peak of three Dawn/Dean pairing fics that I'm

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hi

[wolffowler]

yay ur back
i love it keep it coming

[kribby]

Hi,

I like your proposed beginning. At first, I was a trifle put off by the fact that Dawn was so young but it does work.

I do feel like there is maybe a character missing. It feels like the set up of Dawn and Dean getting back together is to easily set up. Perhaps you need another boyfriend vying for Dawn's attention. Someone harmless that a relationship would work with IF there was the perfect guy already out there-- Dean.

The demon doesn't seem like it is going to be that difficult to kill once you add the Winchester family to the mix. Twists and turns and familial issues needed. Perhaps it could be a demon that John had killed the mate of or... something... revenge.

I think this story will be stronger if you don't pair other people up-- don't pair John/Buffy or Sam/Buffy or Willow/Sam or Willow/John or Faith/Buffy or Faith/Sam... etc.

I do like what you are doing here and I cannot wait to read more!!!!!

[emony2]

Hi, I really quite enjoyed this. I was a little unsure at the start as Dean's not usually daft enough to believe in the age thing (actually, what is the age restriction for them? It's 16 here (England) and I know that it's different in the US.... so just how old was Dawn supposed to be at that point?) but in the end it seems to make more sense... or perhaps I was just more willing to believe it. *shrugs*

I would like to see more of this - to see where you're planning on taking it :D

Em

[anonymous]

great story. I can't wait to read more. I just know Dean is going to be super protective of Mary?

[anonymous]

really glad you're back writing as I love your stuff. liked the setup and the little bit of dynamics we see in this. Some interesting alliances developing. I'd love to read more