so happy they're back together! what have you done to mattie?!...and now it's a cliffhanger.....you love giving us cliffhangers!!!! i wait with baited breath for more.......take care :D
I am in the majority of readers who love that something's wrong with Mattie. It gives them the perfect opportunity to function well as a family. And, even though I'm never really a fan of Rayne.family or Rayne.kids, this wouldn't feel rounded out without it.
So many nice touches... the tattoo, the knocked-out Jayne, but especially the "Kosherized rules" bit. I love that line. It's making me grin stupidly in public. Hah. If the people who can see me could see what I'm reading.
i was all set to do my version of the snoopy happy dance (and it really is my version cause i have no version or flexiability) and then you made mattie sick!!!
Although i'm all kinds of happy Jayne and River made up... so happy dance there
what's with the cliff hangers?? you live to torment me don't you? I know i've scolded you about this before!
i started this a while ago and well real life got in the way and i kinda lost track of it and i just caught back up on it...........and had to let ya know that this is wonderful and i can't wait to see what you have in store.....
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So many nice touches... the tattoo, the knocked-out Jayne, but especially the "Kosherized rules" bit. I love that line. It's making me grin stupidly in public. Hah. If the people who can see me could see what I'm reading.
But it's mine. And I'm not sharing.
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Although i'm all kinds of happy Jayne and River made up... so happy dance there
what's with the cliff hangers?? you live to torment me don't you? I know i've scolded you about this before!
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