The Rain Will Fall - "Rain" prompt

Feb 10, 2007 09:53

Title: The Rain Will Fall
Author: sesheta_66
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Word Count: 3096
Rating: Adult
Challenge: "Rain" for hd_angst and 100quills
Warning: Character deaths (not Harry or Draco) and ANGST.
Summary: Harry hates the rain. He reflects on a few of the reasons why.
Disclaimer: HP world belongs to JK Rowling. No money made by me - I am only playing.

Harry looked out the kitchen window ... )

hd_angst, 100quills, angst, h/d

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phoenixmaharet February 10 2007, 22:42:42 UTC
OW! That HURT! It was beautifully written, but it HURT! ::runs off to console self with fluff::

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sesheta_66 February 10 2007, 23:09:00 UTC
Thanks.

*laughs* - I had to go off and find some fluff to read too, after writing it! If you haven't read jamie2109's Tie My Heart Gently, it's perfect for what ails you ... I just read it:

http://jamie2109.livejournal.com/252123.html#cutid1

It's a 3-part story, and this one links to the next, which links to the final piece. A little bit of flangst, but mainly fluff. Enjoy!

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phoenixmaharet February 11 2007, 03:25:05 UTC
Thanks for the recommendation! You were right, it was the perfectly fluffy cure for beautifully ouchy anst. As painful as your ficlet was I really must add to the chorus of demands for a sequel.... I need to know what happened to the poor boys!

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sesheta_66 February 11 2007, 08:09:59 UTC
Glad you liked jamie's piece ... it really hit the spot for me!

I need to know what happened to the poor boys.
*sighs* - I want to know, too. I may just do that ... we'll see.

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sesheta_66 February 11 2007, 07:32:54 UTC
Thanks ♥

Please? I have cookies. - Chocolate chip, perhaps?

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sesheta_66 February 11 2007, 08:08:48 UTC
Damn that sweet tooth of mine!

*ponders sequel*

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lackofmendacity February 11 2007, 04:34:52 UTC
*bursts into tears* why, oh why!?

ahem. (regains state of coherency)

Loved how you tied in the end back to Harry's feelings about the rain. Plus, rain itself sets the fics in a poignant mood, so I thought that was very well done. Am thoroughly upset at Draco, but the fangirl in me is hopeful that they'll have a nice little reunion (and hot sex) sometime in the future.

That was lovely, albeit heart-wrenching. Damn your love of angst *grins*

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sesheta_66 February 11 2007, 07:35:48 UTC
why, oh why!? - I thought Draco explained it well. At least in HIS mind it makes sense.

Loved how you tied in the end back to Harry's feelings about the rain. - Thank you.

Damn your love of angst - It's a curse! What can I say? *grins back*

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lackofmendacity February 11 2007, 09:10:18 UTC
*laughs* Draco did explain it, and that wasn't a comment on your writing, rest assured. 'Why, oh why' is merely a lament and my crying out loud at the situation that arose...

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sesheta_66 February 11 2007, 09:36:03 UTC
that wasn't a comment on your writing

*laughs* - actually, I didn't take it that way. I just wanted to blame Draco (not myself) for ending it on that note. *shrugs* Sad, really, to blame one of my (OK, JKR's) characters, but there you have it. I am shameless!

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isilme_ February 11 2007, 12:21:14 UTC
Please please please a sequel? pretty please? <3

...

“Don’t wait for me, Harry. Get on with your life. No, don’t do that. Go find a life. And live it. Please. Do that for me.”

I was totally sobbing in this part. You have such a poetic way with words. And the way you described Ron's death. This is amazing.

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sesheta_66 February 11 2007, 13:02:49 UTC
You have such a poetic way with words. *blushes* - Thank you ♥

Please please please a sequel? pretty please? *ponders* - It seems that the majority want a sequel, so I will seriously consider it.

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megyal February 12 2007, 01:59:54 UTC
This is....tear-inducing.

I can really understand where Draco is coming from; you made that so heart-breakingly clear. But my heart was breaking for Harry because he fulfulled that saying, what was it? If you love something, let it go.

I feel like I am one half of a whole, being with you. That’s a good thing, by the way. But it’s not enough.

Oh, god.

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sesheta_66 February 12 2007, 02:14:20 UTC
Thanks so much. Yes, I feel terribly for Harry too. But Draco also let him go, by telling Harry not to wait for him. Sad, sad situation.

*hugs the boys*

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