From the Heart (H/D, PG-13)

Feb 08, 2007 22:04

Title:   From the Heart
Author:   sesheta_66
Word Count:   337
Rating:   PG-13
Challenge:   Jae's Monthly Drabble Challenge #12 - "Harry couldn't wait to give Draco a romantic _________"
Summary:    Harry really wants to make their first Valentine's Day together special.
Disclaimer:   HP world belongs to JK Rowling. No money made by me - I am only ( Read more... )

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jean_c_pepper February 9 2007, 03:54:46 UTC
*Laughing Hysterically*
This was lovely. and Funny.

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sesheta_66 February 9 2007, 03:56:53 UTC
*chuckles*

Glad I made you laugh. You know, I tried, but the serious romantic stuff just wouldn't flow ...

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enchanted_jae February 9 2007, 07:19:12 UTC
That was awesome! Harry's attempts were so brave, yet so futile. Poor, poor Harry. I would have felt more sorry for Draco, though, if Harry had actually given him one of those poems. *laughs*

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sesheta_66 February 9 2007, 07:26:05 UTC
Thanks.

Ah, yes ... imagine Draco trying to keep a straight face! Or outright laughing at poor Harry. Yes, I think it's best all-around if Harry just steers clear of poetry.

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lackofmendacity February 9 2007, 13:20:28 UTC
Ahaha... Harry's poetry skills are brilliantly funny! I can just imagine Draco's reaction to the unsuccessful ones: the raised eyebrow, the slight sneer, "I'm not pale, Potter. I just have delicate skin!"

Anyway, the last poem was very sweet... What a lovely and suitable piece around Valentine's Day!

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sesheta_66 February 9 2007, 23:14:50 UTC
Thanks. I enjoyed writing the horrible poetry! ♥

"I'm not pale, Potter. I just have delicate skin!"

Too true!

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charmed310 February 9 2007, 13:56:03 UTC
Now Draco has to find the poem!

Jake Gyllenhaal … mmm Indeed!

Perhaps Harry can recite something in Parseltongue...

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sesheta_66 February 9 2007, 23:16:52 UTC
Jake Gyllenhaal … mmm Indeed! Yup - my favourite!

Oooohhh, I like the idea of Draco finding it. Hmmm ... plot bunny alert!

I've never written parselsmut before - first time for everything? Or collaboration maybe? Hmmm ...

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charmed310 February 9 2007, 23:30:26 UTC
It's easy... you just write what Harry's saying in italics and Draco goes crazy.

We could collaborate! Hmmm... if you do a part two... you could start with "Harry couldn't wait to give Draco a romantic dinner." Little did he know that Draco couldn't wait to give him the shagging of his life. And then we could cut to Draco coming in the house... Harry banging away in the kitchen, swearing with colourful brilliance, and Draoc could sneak in and see Harry's bum (while he's like, picking up a pot or something) and then his eyes can light on the paper, he'll read it and then melt. Then H can get up and be all "WTF, Draco! You're not supposed to be home!" potspoon and recipe book in hand, then he'll see the look on D's face, look at the paper in his hand, blush a becoming shade of red and then Draco will kiss him soundly, bending him back over the counter and we'll end with a "Happy Valentine's Day, darling." :)

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sesheta_66 February 11 2007, 13:29:15 UTC
OK, minus the parselsmut, I posted our "collaborative" piece. Thanks.

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elleian February 11 2007, 14:22:32 UTC
*giggles* Aww, kudos to Harry for trying!

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sesheta_66 February 11 2007, 16:22:14 UTC
*laughs* - yes, he tried ... but it was REALLY REALLY bad, wasn't it?

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