Comments | serpentine85: Fic:One Afternoon

serpentine85

Fic:One Afternoon - U

Oct 30, 2008 13:32

Don't know the US equivalent, but U is universal (suitable for all)
Consider this a practice run for starandrea 's puppy pile meme. The eventual pile is something a little different (and more frustrating for the author *glares at lilyleia78 *)
'S only an ickle one, but enjoy!
Warning:no beta-ing.
( Dream )

character-muses, meme, mighty morphin', adam, puppy-pile, fic

Comments 15

rivulet027 October 30 2008, 14:49:50 UTC

Very cute. The equivilant of what? All looked lovely to me. Loved that Tommy relized that interupting the moment wasn't going to work in his favor and just went back to sleep.

serpentine85 October 30 2008, 15:01:34 UTC

:) Thanx :) Tommy wouldn't have got very far if he'd tried to get up,lol.

(didn't know what the US version of universal rating is)

rivulet027 October 30 2008, 16:41:04 UTC

Think it would be G for General.

lilyleia78 October 30 2008, 14:58:44 UTC

::tries to look innocent:: ::fails horribly:: ^_^

All kinds of adorable. ♥ I love how Tommy's thinking 'this is awkward' and trying to leave, and the team's like 'no it's not - now go back to sleep' all without anyone saying a word.

G is the rating you were searching for, but U works too.

Pondering your Tori vs. Dustin question. Leaning toward Tori.

serpentine85 October 30 2008, 15:10:37 UTC

Thanks. *tries to think of a bunny to sneak over in revenge*

I figured Ad, Ro and Eesh would have no problem with snuggling and wondered what would happen if I dropped Tommy into the middle of it, lol. Obv, he knows better than to argue with them - maybe he's been silly enough to try it before......

lilyleia78 October 30 2008, 15:09:32 UTC

PS - Don't forget to comment over at starandrea's puppy pile meme with this link.

serpentine85 October 30 2008, 15:11:08 UTC

This was only a practice run, but you think....?

lilyleia78 October 30 2008, 15:30:27 UTC

Definitely! :)

rivulet027 October 30 2008, 16:41:51 UTC

I agree...it fits!

starandrea November 1 2008, 04:04:35 UTC

Aw! I love that Tommy is initiated by a practiced group! ♥ They're like, "No no, you don't understand the principle of not questioning." Yay! They are adorable together! :)

serpentine85 November 1 2008, 11:07:53 UTC

Thank you. It started off as Ad, Ro and Eesh, but then Tommy kinda found his way into the middle of it,lol. I'm glad you liked it!

megthelegend November 1 2008, 05:54:54 UTC

Oh, this is lovely! Very good!

serpentine85 November 1 2008, 11:01:39 UTC

Thank you. Glad you liked it!