fic: pain

[titania_torres]

Title: Pain
Words: 238
Rating: 18A
Disclaimer: Fiction
Summary: Some days Sergio hated himself. He hated what he did and who he hurt in the process

Comments

[bossbadger]

Wow, this is so powerful. Gave me chills. You're very good at writing the darker stuff.

[titania_torres]

thank you =)
I am glad it was able to do that.

[theosakansun]

Oh. I'm at a loss for words really. Even though this was very short, it's one of the most powerful things I've ever read. I was deeply touched by this, it's so beautifully written yet so incredible cruel and raw.

I really feel all of this. I feel so sorry for Fernando, for him needing to take all of this because that's the only way he'll ever get Sergio. It's absolutely heartbreaking to see that Fernando has accepted his situation and just lays there and takes it. Oh bb. I even feel a little for Sergio because he somehow wants to stop abusing Fernando but seemingly cannot make himself stop.

This was one of the best pieces of fiction I've ever read.

:)