"Reflections"

Jan 11, 2007 02:36

Title: "Reflections"
Word Count: 1,120
Rating: PG-13 for language and mature themes. You know, Rent-y things.
Pairing: Benny-centric. Benny/Alison, mentioned Benny/Mimi
Genre: General
Summary: Post-Rent. A day in the life of Benny Coffin. Written for this situation prompt.
Warnings: Language and mature themes. A moment of sex-imagery.
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varymydays January 12 2007, 00:56:16 UTC
Awwww, oh wow, I absolutely loved this. Yay for a Benny-story, seriously. It's always really nice and refreshing to see a story about him, especially one that is so well done and creates so much depth in his character without saying too many words.

That's perhaps what I love the most about this. The subtle way his character is unraveled in just his everyday going ons and in the way that you describe them.

I especially loved him remembering when he first met Mimi and then that sentence at the end.

It's a yawn, not a sigh.That seemed to say so much to me ( ... )

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emilystarr1 January 13 2007, 00:01:52 UTC
Awww, thanks so much, Carissa. ^^ I'm so happy you liked it. *grin* I was shocked when I wanted to write Benny instead of ... well, you know. :p

I'm so glad you liked the Mimi part! That was actually my favourite part, what made me want to write this. So yay for you liking it!! :D

Benny brushing his teeth was hot? Okay. I never intended that, but hey, I'll go with it! :D Hot brushing!Benny. :p

Thanks so much for the feedback, and compliments. ^^ I hope you know how much I appreciate it. ♥

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