[fic] The Plan, The Execution, and The Aftermath; Part One: Condors. [Hesper?]

[serious_chizz]

We've established that I'm a crazy person, right? Ok.

Title: The Plan, The Execution, and The Aftermath.
Author: serious_chizz (me, Ruby!)
Rating: R. Because Jasper says fuck a lot. And, um, other things.
Pairings: It looks like it'll be Hesper, doesn't it?
Summary: Jasper is a very straight teenage boy. Who happens to have majorly inappropriate

Comments

[kathrynew30]

You named this Condors? I don't know why that makes me as happy as it does, but it does. :D

And woo, look at that, I got a shout out. You are super lovely.

Okay well you already know what I thought about this, but I will just reiterate the fact that I really did love this. So in character and just brilliant. I love Jasper's journal entry, because I honestly feel like that is how he would react to falling for his cousin.

And oblivious Henry is awesome, like him reading the notebook and just thinking it was an English assignment. Ah, I enjoyed this.

So I am looking forward to reading the next part. Yay!

And can I just say your tags are awesome, I am laughing very hard at them all.

Wow, long comment. :D

[serious_chizz]

Heh, I have this whole headcanon involving Jasper and condors. I also kind of love how the chapter was called Condors because of the last-second mention of condors, but the mention of condors was to say that there were no condors. -tries not to think about that sentence too much-

Yay, someone noticed my tags! I always try to make them entertaining. My personal favorite is "deflowering jasper on the dancefloor."

[kathrynew30]

I like that condors thing, it's awesome. But ooh yeah while I was Reading that sentence, I was "uh, just go with it or it may hurt my brain." haha XD

oh man that tag is hilarious, they all are, but I liked, "mmm...eyebrows.".

[serious_chizz]

"mmm...eyebrows" is actually something I...frequently verbalize. (I mean, we've got Jasper's eyebrows, and Henry's eyebrows, and to go even further, Kendall's eyebrows...mmm...eyebrows.) Heh...

[nightswhisper]

This is...entirely amusing! I love your writing style as it fits absolutely perfectly! I cannot wait to see the rest of this fic. As, well, it's entirely amusing. *waits not-so-patiently*

And I have to agree with Kathrynew.... your tags are...kinda awesome.

[serious_chizz]

Thanks. ^__^ I was going for amusing.

[chibimarchy]

Thirding the tag love. And Jasper's diary entry made me LOL, hard. I could definitely see that kind of reaction from him. XD

[serious_chizz]

Yay! I'm really glad you laughed and stuff. The most important thing to me is keeping everyone in character, so to hear that the reaction is believable, like, makes my life. ^-^

[liongardant]

First of all, HAHA I like the obscure reference to Jordan's twitter (okay, now I'm hoping to God you actually intended an obscure reference and I'm not being weird

[serious_chizz]

Ha, yeah, I was referencing him. Because Jordan is amazing anf should be quoted on every subject, ever.

-beams at the idea of it being believable- Also, I kind of really like "trial by vagina." And might steal it for later use.

I was really torn aboot about the footnotes, and there probably won't be any in future chapter because of the reasons you mentioned. I decided to include them here since they were both from the very end of the text, and I didn't think they'd be a problem.

Thanks for the comment, and the praise! Present tense is awesome.

[larbd]

I giggled at the footnotes. Because **It wasn't about condors. was hilarious.

I loved his diary entry.

And this whole thing and can't wait for the next chapter.

Also, I'm looking forward to your fanmix. Yesss.

[serious_chizz]

Heh, that was actually my favorite line in the entire chapter.

Thank you for commenting! I'm really glad you liked it. ^_^

And yeah, I really need to finish that fanmix. For some reason, it isn't coming easily.

[larbd]

Hahah it was my favorite line too.

I'm glad you wrote it. :)

That sucks that the fanmix is coming to you easily. I'm sure it'll be awesome once you finish it. I need new music to listen to and I already have chibimarchy's fanmix on repeat.

[serious_chizz]

ZOMG, I'm totally listening to hers right now. All Yr Songs is stuck in my brain.