The Seventh Faerie: Chapter Five

[seramercury]

Fic title: The Seventh Faerie
Author name: seramercury
Artist name: tzeni17
Genre: Het, AU
Pairing: Dean/Jo
Rating: R
Word count: 20,154 words
Warnings: language, violence, implied sexual assault
Summary: Dean Winchester and Jo Harvelle have finally found happiness--together. The Yellow-Eyed Demon is dead and things are starting to feel normal for a change.

Comments

[ailurophile6]

Well, first, this is very well written! You and your beta did a great job.

I've seen plenty of big bang fics that I couldn't even get through because they were so poorly written and beta'd.

It's not quite as dark as I'd expect Supernatural fic to be, and I think maybe that and it being a het fic is why you're not getting a big response. SPN is a slash fandom.

I think you did a good job, although I think Dean's stomach wound and surgery would have prevented him from being up and around so soon.

I enjoyed it, even tho it was het :D

[seramercury]

Yeah, I'm kind of mad at myself for writing het (as in I should have written gen), but I've been wanting to write this fic for awhile now.

And, yeah, I'm sure it would have prevented him from that, but IMO I don't think he would listen. Hee.

Thanks for your feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed it. My beta is an English major. LOL!

[ailurophile6]

All that matters in the end is that you're happy with it, and you finished it, and did it your way :)