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serafina19

Turn the Page (7/20)

Mar 15, 2015 21:57

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title: turn the page, chloe sullivan, evie chambers, multi-chapter, fanfiction, oliver queen, victor stone, smallville

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malugargula March 16 2015, 18:21:08 UTC

Poor Chris
I hope Chloe, Evie and the guys can help her find some peace
Amazing chapter
I loved Chlollie talk at the end.

serafina19 March 27 2015, 02:37:59 UTC

Chris' backstory isn't easy, but in time, answers will come. I'm glad you enjoyed this, thanks!

kachica March 17 2015, 12:51:55 UTC

great update.

serafina19 March 27 2015, 02:38:29 UTC

Thanks as always!

scout09 March 18 2015, 22:42:17 UTC

Since the news broke about her and Oliver doing whatever it was they were doing... Cute. :) I love when you drop lines like that and you never overdo it. You've somewhat inverted their public relationship from what we saw on the show (hiding a romantic relationship vs. misleading one that's actually innocent), but that line still works in this context. Neat.

I'm truly digging the larger cast of characters here and how involved in the plot everyone is turning out to be. The trappings of a tv show with limited character budget hindered Lois and Chloe's social life and it's nice to see them interacting with more women. Chloe seems much less traumatized by Jimmy's death here, but that makes sense because she's been surrounded by supportive friends. I'm glad to know a little more about Chris as she's the newcomer in this story and her power with her sister is (was) cool. Hopefully sharing that with Evie especially, who is no stranger to telepathy, will help her a lot.

"“Were you in love with her or something?” Something about the ( ... )

serafina19 March 27 2015, 02:48:10 UTC

That line was a last minute addition, actually. I was trying to describe the relationship from Lois' point of view and then it came to me and I couldn't not use it ( ... )