Notbroken (7/12)

[serafina19]

Title: Notbroken
Summary: Two years after the events in "Calendar Girl," Chloe finds herself days from beginning her final year at SCU when Oliver suddenly returns to Star City. But between balancing her ambitions, school, and her investigative tendencies towards the new vigilantes in town, Chloe finds herself struggling to choose the life she wants

Comments

[slytherinpunk]

I will be going back to comment on the previous chapters I've missed, but I just couldn't resist reading this again and flailing all over the place.

That archery scene was so perfect. You could feel the raw intensity of their attraction and desire, and its so relieving after everything they've been through, and the trials they've faced--I'm so grateful you left that scene in and let us see this moment between them.

Now at the same time, your twist/cliffhanger made my head spin. Even with your clues and being your beta reader I have no idea how to explain how much you surprised me, other than to say you're amazing ♥

And absolutely too good to me <3 I can't wait for more =)

[serafina19]

I'm covered in mosquito bites and I broke my aunt's pot with a bocce ball... so at this point, I'd take any comment, but this puts a huge grin on my face, then again, all of your comments do. The whole "you're too good to me"... the feeling's mutual.

Weird enough, I actually thought of putting that scene in October/November, but the Cupid comment moved it to V-day... and I figured it would be better when they were single.

*grins* Just wait until you see what I've got planned next...

[brittany2922]

Okay first off, I have been terrible at leaving you feedback for this story and I'm sorry, because I absolutely LOVE it!

I loved the Valentine's Day archery lesson, and the ending... awesome! I can't wait to see how Tess taking over for Lex plays out.

This chapter was amazing hun, I'm dying to see what happens in March! =)

[serafina19]

No sweat... we all go through phases where we don't comment as much as we'd like to, but I appreciate every comment I get, so thanks.

March is about half written, but I'm working on April because I just figured out its plotline and I want to keep updates as close together as possible. That being said... I'll do my best to get it up soon.

[serafina19]

Umm... we have a little more work to do before that. It's coming though... I swear.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment though.

[chlollifan84]

OMG! This was soooooo good!
The archery lesson scene was absolutely perfect.
I can't wait for them to finally be together.
I also can't wait until the next update!
Really nice job! Bravo!

[serafina19]

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked that part.

I'm working towards that, just have a couple things to go through first.

[liselle2010]

Ah Man, Tess is in charge. I am not sure if this is a good thing or a bad thing but it sure will make things interesting...but seriously, I just wish these two would kiss and just get it over with the tension is killing me here.

[serafina19]

Interesting is probably the right word for Tess right now... mainly because I'm still figuring out her arc (again).

I'll get there eventually, I swear.