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serafina19

Notbroken (7/12)

Jun 23, 2011 16:25

Title: Notbroken
Summary: Two years after the events in "Calendar Girl," Chloe finds herself days from beginning her final year at SCU when Oliver suddenly returns to Star City. But between balancing her ambitions, school, and her investigative tendencies towards the new vigilantes in town, Chloe finds herself struggling to choose the life she wants ( Read more... )

fanfiction, oliver queen, chloe sullivan, title: notbroken, verse: calendar girl, multi-chapter, smallville

Comments 17

chloesilvers June 24 2011, 15:55:27 UTC

I love this story, to the degree that I spent last night re-reading Calendar Girl and the previous chapters of Not Broken. Enough said.

serafina19 June 24 2011, 18:24:28 UTC

Wow! Thanks so much!

inkykate June 24 2011, 18:56:47 UTC

Two updates in a week! And both were fantastic. :)

I love love love the Warrior-esque archery scene. And I can't wait to see what you do with the return of Tess.

serafina19 June 24 2011, 19:30:38 UTC

*grins* Thanks! I figured that might make up for me taking almost a month off.

greenteam4ever June 25 2011, 10:46:00 UTC

Whoa. Tess. So I suppose she owns the DP now, does that leave Chloe without her intership?
I lloved the archery lesson, I mean who could possibly resist this warrior scene?Right, no one. I keep wondering how soon Oliver will tell Chloe his secret?Or for this matter maybe she will tell him she knows?
Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S. I love this song by Matthew West, now it's playing in my head. LoL

serafina19 June 25 2011, 16:11:05 UTC

Internship status is determined in March.

Who could resist (writing) a warrior scene? Me... almost. I was a terrified of it being a cheap rip-off but Sly insisted it stayed. It seems to have gone over well, so I'm glad I kept it.

As for the song, I got it from a friend, and I'd been trying to find a song lyric for my title of my journal... it's been playing in my head since I changed it. But it's one of my new favs so I don't mind.

gaialy June 26 2011, 12:09:10 UTC

so we are still going with the Tess angle...excellent. I really liked her by the end. In the series of course.

serafina19 June 27 2011, 01:07:07 UTC

I did say that Tess would be sticking around... she serves a purpose in this story and has a bit part in the one that follows (that is of course if all goes to plan.

Thanks for your comments!