Comments | serafina19: Calendar Girl (4/12)

serafina19

Calendar Girl (4/12)

Feb 15, 2011 16:22

Disclaimer: I own nothing, except for Evie Chambers and Scott Kane, any resemblance to another character is coincidental.
Warning: Mature subject matter ahead.

Author Note: I'm so sorry for the delay... I really thought I'd have this up by now, but I've been trying to tie up loose ends in later chapters (and finish "Defying Reason") so I can update ( Read more... )

fanfiction, oliver queen, title: calendar girl, chloe sullivan, verse: calendar girl, multi-chapter, smallville

Comments 21

luminare91 February 15 2011, 23:54:52 UTC

I'm so glad you updated this. I love that Oliver's going out to parties he doesn't want to go to so that people will leave Chloe alone. It's so sweet, and just like him. I loved that he didn't tell her dad that he helped get that guy off her, even though it probably would have earned him points.
And that bit where Chloe said he was part of the family....*gah* too perfect.
Can't wait to read more!!!

serafina19 February 16 2011, 00:11:46 UTC

The 'family' line was an impulse line... one I almost got rid of... but I couldn't. So I'm glad you liked it.

As for updating... I'll do my best.

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serafina19 February 16 2011, 00:12:16 UTC

Thank you, I'll try to update as soon as I can.

gaialy February 16 2011, 00:15:42 UTC

I just love this story:) and go Evie:)

serafina19 February 16 2011, 01:55:59 UTC

*chuckle* Glad you still like her, Evie's so much fun to write.

sball_09 February 16 2011, 00:40:56 UTC

i love this story. i get the feeling that lois won't be forcing chloe to go to any more parties after what happened. i'm glad that ollie and evie got to chloe in time to help her. i think it was kind of sweet for ollie to not tell her father of his involvement in chloe's rescue, and how he flew her dad out early on his private jet. i can't wait to see what hppens in december. keep up the great work.

serafina19 February 16 2011, 01:58:48 UTC

As far as I've written so far, no... but who knows.

Ollie knows whom he should earn his respect from, so downplaying his involvement seemed like the right way to go.

Things start to get interesting in the next couple chapters, building up to the parts I haven't written yet, so I need to get started on that.

Thanks for reading.

flyswithnowings February 16 2011, 01:09:13 UTC

Yay new chapter! I love this story so, so much and I love how well you've worked with the plot for each of the months and how well they're all coming together. Can't wait for the next chapter!

serafina19 February 16 2011, 02:01:23 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it so much and that you like the concept.

With any luck, the next few chapters should be out soon.