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serafina19

Calendar Girl (4/12)

Feb 15, 2011 16:22

Disclaimer: I own nothing, except for Evie Chambers and Scott Kane, any resemblance to another character is coincidental.
Warning: Mature subject matter ahead.

Author Note: I'm so sorry for the delay... I really thought I'd have this up by now, but I've been trying to tie up loose ends in later chapters (and finish "Defying Reason") so I can update ( Read more... )

fanfiction, oliver queen, title: calendar girl, chloe sullivan, verse: calendar girl, multi-chapter, smallville

Comments 21

lali_lewicki February 16 2011, 01:37:52 UTC

Yay! I love this story! Specially because we always get a whole month at a time, it's awesome!

This was a really nice chapter, I loved how Oliver is already saving Chloe... he's totally MY knight in shining leather... *swoons*

=D Nice work... again! ;)

serafina19 February 16 2011, 02:05:23 UTC

Yeah... something tells me I would have gotten stuff thrown at me it I only released half this chapter. I might have some mean cliffhangers coming though.

*sigh* You're not alone my friend.

Thank you!

lali_lewicki February 16 2011, 02:26:49 UTC

Ohhh!! Only half of this chapter would have been mean! It would be like telling Bart he can't have Mexican food, or telling Victor that the wi-fi is down or keeping A.C. from having his daily swim (I'm willing to bet that A.C. goes out for a swim everyday).

It would be like Oliver getting his bike stolen and keeping Chloe away from her laptop. It would be mean... lol... am I dramatic much?

I'll try to prepare myself for the future cliffhangers, though! ;) You did give me fair warning!

kachica February 16 2011, 02:56:40 UTC

Great update, Sera! I'm enjoying this story. Can't wait for the next one! :)

serafina19 February 16 2011, 03:36:42 UTC

Thanks, I'll try to update quicker this time.

brittany2922 February 16 2011, 15:44:26 UTC

Such a great chapter!

Loved Oliver and Evie saving Chloe. I couldn't believe that Olver didn't tell Gabe he was involved in the rescue, but I'm really glad Gabe figured it out for himself and warmed up to Ollie in spite of his reputation!

Can't wait for December! =)

serafina19 February 17 2011, 00:42:41 UTC

I never watched the earlier seasons, so Gabe might be a little OOC, but I felt that he was a pretty understanding person who'd give Oliver a decent chance.

Thanks again for your help.

iheartbl February 17 2011, 17:03:31 UTC

The scene between Gabe/Ollie/Chloe was awesome. I loved how Oliver was able to be a part of their thanksgiving, and he took care of her after that guy slipped something in her drink. Great Chapter, can't wait for December

serafina19 February 17 2011, 17:41:09 UTC

You know, Oliver wasn't initially supposed to be there, but after starting a later chapter... I had to make it happen. Glad you enjoyed the chapter though, with any luck, I'll be able to update soon.

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serafina19 February 20 2011, 01:59:45 UTC

I've checked out the site and even translated the comments because my french is mediocre at best.

Let everyone know that I appreciate their kinds words (and I appreciate yours as well).

As for the kiss... bear with me is all I can say.