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septemberoses

Copenhagen, Scene 8

May 27, 2011 20:55

Title: Copenhagen, Scene 8
Author: Septemberoses
Fandom: True Blood/En Forelskelse crossover
Characters: Carsten/Eric/Godric
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Eric, Godric and Carsten are back in their hotel room…
Word Count: 5,300
Disclaimer: None of these characters is mine.
Author's Warning: Having written two cuddly chapters of Carsten and his mother, ( Read more... )

rating: nc17, pairing: eric/godric, pairing: eric/carsten, fanfiction

Comments 37

chocolate_jive June 13 2011, 23:59:48 UTC

This seriously freaked me out a bit ( ... )

chocolate_jive June 14 2011, 02:00:49 UTC

and after another reread I realized that Carsten is really strange here, too. He's not as sharp as usual, not focused. And he's definitely not enjoying sex with Eric, which is, well, disturbing. That first part, is it Erics POV, more or less? Is he, like, the focalizer-character? Because it reads like a shortstory I've read about a killer, and I didn't get that he was killing thses people because it was told in third person, but from his perspective, and all the reader really got was the extacy of the kill. And in this, I feel like Eric is raping Carsten. Especially bc Carsten is on V, and all wishy-washy dreamy like.

Oh god, I'm sorry I'm spamming you with my wacky theories. I'll just wait for the next update and hope for answers there.

hana_tsuki June 14 2011, 15:00:42 UTC

I found your journal only a few days ago, and I'm totally in love with your stories <3 You really bring the characters to live for us. I have to say I loved the canning part of this one, with Eric not having a clue and Godric not considering himself cruel. Your Godric is terrifying. I'm just waiting for your next story! And I love your Carsten - you write him so adorably! I'm Norwegian and totally love the story setting and language mix ;)

I have a BDSM kink - especially with Eric as the sub, and a even wider spanking kink! I would forever be in your debt of you had Eric spanked by Godric, preferably with Carsten watching. (And Godric letting Carsten fuck Eric after, before the marks faded.) *hint hint* Hands you some chocolate to go with your porn. <3

chimera3838 August 13 2011, 18:13:42 UTC

Wow that scene between Eric and Godric is amazing. Loved it. You are a fantastic writer!

clair3 September 18 2011, 17:21:31 UTC

such brilliance!

charliechaz October 6 2011, 00:30:18 UTC

I love this Carsten/copenhagen series. And unfortunately the producers of true blood saw fit give us a single godric scene despite the teaser promos : ( I'm totally getting my godric fix from you. So have to ask the world's worst question...will there be more updates?

Totally addicted right now and they don't have affordable Allan Hyde rehab facilities!