Obedience

[septemberoses]

Title: Obedience
Author: septemberoses
Fandom: True Blood
Rating: NC17 for KINK, punishment, dubious/non-consent, hurt/comfort, pls see WARNING
Characters: Eric/Godric
Word Count: 3700

Plot Summary: Eric is sentenced by the Tribunal for plotting to have Stan killed. This is a sequel to Denial and will make more sense if you read that

Comments

[gruochrua]

You know, I always seem to read these in the morning before work, and I have to say this was a rather unusual start to the day. BUT--I must admit I enjoyed it--fisting, like food kink, isn't one of my RL fetishes, but this was really done quite delicately. I feel like the physical act was more of a medium to explore Godric and Eric's complex relationship, which I always love to read about. I thought it was actually very tender, especially the last scene.

And, as always, I admire you bravery and willingness to go all the way there. I can't wait to see what unusual fuckery you come up with next ;)

[gruochrua]

Also--"at least I have small hands"--HA

[septemberoses]

And that was so WRONG of me! I thought about taking it out. Thing is, I liked it so much ... if you read it as a serious comment, that's so Godric, that freaky, unemotional detail. If you read it as a joke, well, hey, he's got a freaky sense of humor. I like it either way.

[septemberoses]

Hah, yes. You can count on me to turn a fistfucking fic into "a medium to explore Godric and Eric's complex relationship" -- I tried some different angles, having set the goal, and the straight-up fuckery (like: they're in a sex club or something) just wasn't working. Although, hey, that could happen eventually. And thanks for the props, I think I spent more time staring at the screen on this one than any other fic I've completed.

[withoutcolor]

This was, in short, amazingly well done. If there has ever been a "tasteful" fistfucking, this was totally it.

Poor Eric, he always gets the shaft (no pun, intended...), however he usually deserves it. Godric in this was fantastic... it was almost sweet seeing how hard he tried to make it as best he could for Eric. Well, you know, sweet if you totally disregard everything else that was happening. Anyways, really enjoyed it, you definitely delivered on this one!

Also, your warning..LOL..

OH! and so that uh, story Godric tells Eric..are we going to get to see that played out sometime?? (God, I'm greedy..feel free to totally disregard this, haha)

[septemberoses]

This was SO FUCKING HARD to write. I swear my next five fics are going to be shopping for a flat-panel TV, and Eric doing his taxes. I almost dropped my attempt at a tasteful fistfucking, only by then I'd talked about it with a couple people and was too proud to just let it go. The plot idea I came up with eventually worked for me, but I fiddled with the details forever -- making it more graphic, then less, then more ...
Hehe. You're on to me. Which story do you want? The toy story? Nah, you want the party story. I've got to finish at least one of the fics that are just sitting here - Carsten/Stig and/or the, uh, Godric/Eric/Carsten menage. See, if I type it in here, maybe it will happen. And then I'll be torturing Godric at some point, instead of Eric, I have a dark fic that's kind of different, but I haven't figured out parts of it.

[septemberoses]

Oh! BTW the fistfucking was going to be AT the photographer's party -- I wanted to do something like an orgy/sex party. Gratuitous fuckery all around. And I still want to, but I found I couldn't write the fistfucking, I kept thinking, Eric wouldn't like it, although God knows that never stopped me before, and I'm not sure he liked this any better... but then this became more about them, more personal.

[withoutcolor]

Hahaha of course I totally want the party story! Though I think you're right about this being more personal for them, which in my opinion is why it works so well... That being said, I too find gratuitous fuckery all around to be a perfectly agreeable party them..uh, ahem.

BTW I go away for a day only to come back and find TWO kinky ficlets/outtakes of pervy fun posted??? It's like Christmas!

[blissy83]

"...at least I have small hands" LOL

Ouch. I can't believe you managed to make me feel for Eric, it was very emotional seeing him so vulnerable and exposed. As usual, you characterized Godric beautifully; and here I was expecting something kinkier, but instead this was like a glimpse of their intricate and caring relationship ♥ :)

[septemberoses]

Wait, wait .... I warmed up your small, frozen heart for Eric?!? How was it for you, eh? It must have been okay since I'm looking at Godric kitty, i love that icon so much it's ridiculous. And *I* was expecting something kinkier too -- I read all these hilarious Harry Potter fisting fics looking for ideas, who knew?!? -- but we ended up with something more personal.

[septemberoses]

Sorry. Carsten kitty. Godric on the brain. I'm being hard on Godric in a fic I'm writing now. I swing both ways. :)

[blissy83]

It was way much more than ok ;)
I've been in the Harry Potter fandom for years and I've never found a fisting fic, what a shame XD, hope you have feasted your eyes on them

[eleni81]

When I first saw a fisting scene I was shocked! I wasn't disgust with the action really; I was in awe that human body can actually do that! I mean, yeah, women give birth but they are made this way! They suppose to do it!!!

I liked the way you handled this. There are people that actually like this and the way you wrote it didn't degrade it or made it sound cheap.
I like that you dare to write these things and I'll have you know that because of how you write it, I will read everything you write in the Kink subject. It doesn't make me feel weird or bad for liking it and that says a lot about your ability to approach people with your writing!

Keep it up honey, the good work I mean ^_^

[septemberoses]

Thanks very much. I'd set this as a personal challenge to see if I could write such a fic and not being sure that I could (and I know, I have seen some amazing images. Like, up past the elbow ... WHOA.) And the research was fun. Although at this point anyone who looked at my computer history would assume I'm a gay man into bondage!
Joking aside, you paid me a huge compliment. I write about kinks I don't even HAVE, because it's an interesting challenge, and any time I get a comment that says something like, I'm not even into this, but it was hot, or I understand it better now, or whatever, I feel like I've accomplished something.

[berthablue]

Awesome, as always! Probably not something I should have been reading during a class on rape and sex assault (my life is strangely synchronistic), but could not resist!

I could totally feel both Godric's and Eric's emotions though this! So well done, I just wanted to hug them both!

[septemberoses]

That is too funny. No, I think this was NOT the appropriate rape class reading... yeah, I kind of owe them a good time at this point, don't I? They need to go to a party or something.