Obedience

[septemberoses]

Title: Obedience
Author: septemberoses
Fandom: True Blood
Rating: NC17 for KINK, punishment, dubious/non-consent, hurt/comfort, pls see WARNING
Characters: Eric/Godric
Word Count: 3700

Plot Summary: Eric is sentenced by the Tribunal for plotting to have Stan killed. This is a sequel to Denial and will make more sense if you read that

Comments

[celebelai]

YES! Fisting is one of my RL kinks, but the way this was written didn't turn me on so much, probably because I felt so bad for Eric. I've never through of fisting being used as punishment before. Godric fisting Eric is a lovely image, with his tiny hands, and I can imagine what Eric was feeling, as well as Godric, just trying to keep it together, telling him a story. This is so well written, and that last paragraph. Gah. I don't know what it is about hand on the back of the neck, but picturing that between the two of them kills me. Thank you so much for this:)

[septemberoses]

You're welcome. This was major DO NOT WANT territory for me. But I'd joked about it several times, and I decided to try to write it. It was *incredibly* difficult to write. I tried to make it a consensual thing, but that didn't work out at all. And trying to write it in a way that provided enough detail so that it made sense, but not enough to squick ME, was really, really hard. I actually had several drafts of it.

I know, the comfort! It's the only way I could write it, if there was comfort at the end. And I imagine the hand/neck gesture as this moving, intimate thing they have between them.