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Another Chance by Bluewolf, illustrated by Banbury

Nov 07, 2013 06:00

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mab_browne November 7 2013, 08:34:36 UTC

For any other commenters, I guess my response could be potentially spoilery, so scroll past fast?

It would seem that great minds think alike in wanting to explore alternative Sentinel Too scenarios. :-) And I had to grin at the fact that we both felt the need to lampshade the fact that the temple was unknown.

I liked the mirror image idea for the art - it was a nice conceit to tie in with the story concept. :-)

bluewolf458 November 13 2013, 06:22:17 UTC

It was one thing that never was explained in SenToo, how the temple was there, still apparently functional, but apparently unknown....

pattrose November 7 2013, 10:17:45 UTC

I read this story about two weeks ago and I couldn't wait for it to come out so I could praise, Sheila. You did such a fantastic job. This was such a good idea and I for one am super glad you wrote it. I loved the mirror concept and I was hooked from then on. I'm not saying any more because I don't want to spoil it for everyone. It's a really easy read, the time flies by and before long you're wishing you had read slower. It's that good. :) Thank you, Sheila.

Banbury, the art is really nice. I like it. Very different and I like different, a lot.

Hugs, Patt

bluewolf458 November 13 2013, 06:22:48 UTC

Thanks!

bluewolf458 November 7 2013, 11:22:03 UTC

I really should have added my thanks to Banbury in the author's notes. Beautiful artwork.

anonymous November 7 2013, 12:52:49 UTC

Very nice angle - just shows what a little knowledge can do - forewarned is forearmed, as they say! 'Nuff said, as I don't want to spoil it for anyone, but I like your version very much.

And I love the mirror image effects of your artwork, Banbury. Very appropriate. Thank you both.

Kate x

bluewolf458 November 13 2013, 06:25:03 UTC

I'm not sure just where the idea came from, but it just wouldn't go away...

kernel1 November 7 2013, 16:49:33 UTC

This was an interesting and original read. I liked the mirror idea. It would be nice if we all could have a book like that to help us avoid pitfalls! And I liked the bit with the other jaguar and the sense of balance it gave. (I'm trying not to give too much away here) The art was very apt with the mirror images.

bluewolf458 November 13 2013, 06:26:36 UTC

Well, not so much the book as the letter :-) Thanks.