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annieb1955 November 10 2012, 18:38:36 UTC
What a great story. Totally involved me from the first word to the last. Very nice art too.

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mab_browne November 11 2012, 05:19:33 UTC
Thank you. Banbury's pic does work well as cover art, and I had several versions to consider.

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kernel1 November 10 2012, 18:42:22 UTC
Lovely artwork which really set the scene for this story. I just loved the conversation and banter in this story. There was a lovely sense of them being at peace and relaxed with each other. I loved the imagery of throwing the diss in the bonfire and moving on from the "temple of the mind" to Anahata. Beautiful story and art. Thank you.

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mab_browne November 11 2012, 05:20:54 UTC
I love an angsty post-series story as much as the next person, but sometimes it's nice to see them getting along (most of the time, anyway) too. Thanks. :-) And yes, I was very happy with Banbury's cover art.

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alynt November 10 2012, 18:46:27 UTC
Wonderful story. The hint of peace is interwoven throughout the story, matching Jim and Blair's feelings toward each other and their moving forward in their lives. I loved it. Great art too - really interesting and appropriate composition.

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mab_browne November 11 2012, 05:21:53 UTC
Thank you for the fb. Banbury's art had a nice unity with the story that I was very pleased with,

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bluewolf458 November 10 2012, 18:47:00 UTC
Good one! Nice peaceful story.

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mab_browne November 11 2012, 05:22:20 UTC
It can't all be angst post-series, even for me. *g* Thank you.

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snailbones November 10 2012, 19:14:40 UTC


I've always loved the way you write them, and this is a perfect example of why - they're still themselves, and there's a real sense of them moving towards a changing relationship, without hurry or too much stress, plus you always write Blair as an intelligent grown up. I love the atmosphere, and the drumming, and Jim's gentle acceptance of the 'weird' stuff around him. It's a gorgeous peaceful story, and I enjoyed every minute of it, thank you.

The artwork is fabulous too - I really like the slightly mystic look to it, and the lighting and colours are perfect.

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mab_browne November 11 2012, 05:23:55 UTC
I like the two of them together as grown-ups, I guess. It's my own little narrative kink. *g* Banbury had a nice theme going with the art samples she showed me, and I was very happy with the one here. Thanks for the lovely fb.

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