Take a Chance - Tora/Saga - 1/4

[sentimentalenvy]

Title: Take a Chance
Chapter(s): 1/4
Author: sentimentalenvy
Genre: AU/Romance/Comedy/little angst?
Rating: PG-13 *omguh what o: ?*
Warnings: language
Pairing/Characters: Tora/Saga
Synopsis: “Don’t be such a girl Saga-chan,” Tora rolled his eyes as he chucked the can of hairspray aside.

Comments: Actually, I found this lying around in my files forever ago.

Comments

[lilja_june]

more more more! this is gooooooood *nods nods*

[sentimentalenvy]

ooo: thank you so much o: !

[tigerist]

don't tell me that's the end! *cries*

okay, so now some more coherent comment ^^ I simply loved this story. the way you portrayed them, the way you managed to decsribe their emotions [especially Saga, obviously, but Tora's care for Saga is visible too and its oh co cute how he worries for him and wants the best for him] and the way they interact.

so now I can only say that I hope you will continue this story :)

[sentimentalenvy]

O_O It was supposed to be D;
but so far people has been wanting another part
I don't mind it o:

omgah thanks x_x I didn't think it would be cause I wasn't completely concious :x but I'm so glad to hear otherwise DX! Really DX! I'm glad o:.

I don't know about making it a story o_o
It's prolly gonna end up in one more part or parts @O@/

[tigerist]

by a "story" I only meant a sequel, or something, I'm not asking ofr a multichapter fic cause I know how hard it is to write one (^^)
and why I was asking for a sequel in the first place? the end of this fic... I don't really know how to describe it... it kinda leaves a feeling that there's supposed to me more of it, that it's just a part of bigger story, that it ended in a middle of a scene as a sort of cliffhanger. and its not even about it having a happy ending later, but... just about being more of this story.
I think that so many questions about a sequel show how good this fic is, how well you managed to write it and, what to me personaly is the most important part, that this fic managed to stirr up emotions in people. good emotions. certainly it did it for me and I thank you for that (^__^)

[sentimentalenvy]

awh ty @___@ !
Yah I know what you mean o:
I have a bad habit of starting fics and taking 54683508483984 years to finish ._. or not finish at all -_-;

Ohh yeah I see o: ~ I'll finish it with a strong ending >8O!

[silverxhoshi]

Is there going to be a sequel? (:

[sentimentalenvy]

I think so @o@ ~

[yummypocky]

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuui.
o:
will there be anotherrr?

[sentimentalenvy]

I think so o:

I think I got soemthing (I just hope I don't forget haha x_x)

[frenchxpanties]

ZOMGWTFBBQBANANANESS! I demand a sequel!!! XDD

Ttly loved this, haven't read a TxS as good as this in a loooooong time. You should srsly have a sequel!

[sentimentalenvy]

O_____O Lol XD

Aaah okay hokai @o@!!

You flatter me XD hur hur

thanks for the nice comment o@//@o ~!

[frenchxpanties]

Hahah! No problemo! So how about that sequel, ehh? I can wait! For about one week. LOLZZ. Jking, jking.

[sentimentalenvy]

lmao yes I know x) !
I just finished my finals on Friday so now I can say that I can o: !