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A Thread Cut With a Carving Knife

Jan 04, 2009 00:40

Characters/Pairings: Sayid/Sun
Rating: R
Summary: Sayid and Sun meet for the first time in three years, but Sun barely recognizes the man she once knew.
Notes: Title comes from the Stars song by the same name.

( Her brain told her hands to push him away, but they didn't listen. )

sayid/sun, sun, sayid

Comments 3

prochytes January 6 2009, 13:26:20 UTC

I enjoyed this. You do a good job of rendering the distinctive voices of the two of them: Sayid's very formal and elaborate diction alongside Sun's penchant for disconcerting bluntness ("Your life belongs to someone else, now, anyway.") Very nice.

sentiently January 8 2009, 00:55:28 UTC

Thank you so much.

30_rock_office January 8 2010, 00:27:01 UTC

You've got them both down wonderfully. Very believable too. :]