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wanderlust_mr November 25 2012, 09:05:58 UTC
SPOT! Live commentary as I read...

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wanderlust_mr November 25 2012, 09:07:46 UTC
“are you still in here?”

... “no,” ... “i actually left a while ago.”

“who; you or kai?”

THIS IS JUST PERFECT.

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wanderlust_mr November 25 2012, 09:09:40 UTC
“it’s not hard,” jongin lies. it’s extremely hard, it’s all of jongin’s life in three minutes, each time, every time. “you just, i dunno, move.” he takes a step forward and twirls, sliding to the other side of joonmyun.

As a dancer myself, I totally get this. It's that naturalistic feel where we KNOW dance is like our second skin,

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wanderlust_mr November 25 2012, 09:17:19 UTC
And the ending note is also amazingly perfect. :) Now on to the next one!

The color change of his lips when they're kissed is so poetic. *SIGHS*

Also, the ending note of this one KILLS. I love that type of verbatim .

On to 03:

he doesn't have to turn to know who the culprit is and punches them in the stomach

I love this showcase of friendship. Reminds me of how I'd act and feel towards my own friends.

The dialogue in this own is so snark-y and full of wit! :) And this is my favorite~!

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kim_ri November 27 2012, 04:06:09 UTC
IQRA WHY WAS I NOT INFORMED OF THIS S M H

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kim_ri November 27 2012, 04:08:02 UTC
omfg all i read was the krisyeol i feel so bad but OMFG TOO SHORT IQRA WHY

and kris wants to hear chanyeol scream his name, wants to taste chanyeol on his tongue.
asdfjkl oh god i made inhuman noises i just apsiegjsdf

he presses his lips to chanyeol’s again, hands pulling at the hair at the back of chanyeol’s neck, and thinks that maybe chanyeol wants all of kris, too.
MY HEARTTTTTTTTASDFJKL

ugh that was so good tho SO GOOD ;__________________________;

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itachibana13 November 27 2012, 07:13:25 UTC
SOBS I'M SORRY I'LL TELL YOU NEXT TIME

cries it doesn't matter and I'M SORRY IDK HOW TO MAKE IT ANY LONGER

huhuhu but thank you for reading /o/

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amoleggere December 2 2012, 16:44:49 UTC
sobbing at the kitty fic i can totally picture them. bratty sehun and pushy luhan, I LOVE. love the other fics too <3 cute drabbles, thanks!

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itachibana13 December 3 2012, 07:53:38 UTC
thank you so much for reading! :D ♥

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