Love Potions 101: How Not To Use Them

Feb 10, 2012 17:36

Love Potions 101: How Not To Use Them
jonghyun/key
1952 words; g
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fandom: shinee, rating: g, pairing: jonghyun/key

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shayvanwinkle February 11 2012, 13:08:35 UTC
i loved this :D i'm kind of picky about jongkey stories, but this one was perfect. thanks for posting ^^

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itachibana13 February 12 2012, 02:29:04 UTC
thank you so much for reading!

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itachibana13 February 12 2012, 02:30:06 UTC
sobs i was wondering how to avoid that cliche because quite honestly, i don't think jongkey would fall into that line of cliche, because they just don't really strike me that way?

ha
ha
ha
ha
where is my cheating onkey

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dongbangsuju20 February 12 2012, 00:55:56 UTC
sadjashfg JONGKEY SOBS
AND YOU CONTINUED THE MAGIC SMTH SMTH PROMPT \O/
THANK YOU SO MUCH SOBS
and sorry it took me so long to write a comment ;;

“What if your mom was in my bed last night,” Jonghyun retorts. Kibum smacks him.

waylt jonghyun sdhjhf

I looked through all of his textbooks, and found this random blond hair in his English textbook.

BUT WHY WOULD YOU THINK THIS IS THE RIGHT HAIR SOBS. THAT IS SO DUMB. ashdjshdghfg

“What’s the magic word?”

“How am I supposed to know?” Jonghyun asks.

“It’s your book! Make something up then.”

cries I still love this part ♥

“Why do you suck at this?”

“It’s not my fault! Taecyeon gave me this book, go ask him!”

sdhjsdhf but why do you suck at this jonghyun >>>>>:
why do you suck at everything jonghyun shdjhf

“Woah,” Jonghyun says. “This is so cool. Was this not the best idea we’ve had yet?”

“Best idea yet,” Kibum agrees, and they high five.

you are so dumb cries

“BEST IDEA EVER,” Jonghyun shouts as he retells the story to Kyuhyun.OMG GO AWAY JONGHYUN NOBODY WANTS YOU ( ... )

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itachibana13 February 12 2012, 02:37:10 UTC
holy crap this comment is so big

holy crap

sobs i love how everything is basically JONGHYUN WHY DO YOU SUCK SO MUCH i have taught you well

THE WHAT AND WHAT

i think there is a general consensus that my sexfic is really, really bad huhuhu YOU ARE FREE TO WRITE THE SEQUEL WHERE THAT HAPPENS THOUGH

sobs thank you so much, and i love you too! aaaand HAPPY BIRTHDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

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linnhe February 12 2012, 02:21:41 UTC
I should really be asleep right now but I've been planning to read this ever since it was posted and shayvanwinkle was like 'it's so cute!' so I snuck it in and YAY because it's so charming and funny and kind of perfect :D

“BEST IDEA EVER,” Jonghyun shouts as he retells the story to Kyuhyun.

“How are you going to get Taemin to drink bubbly pink shit?” Minho asks.

“Um, sorry, what was that?” Kibum says suddenly, putting his hand next to his ear. “I couldn’t hear you over the sound of the BEST IDEA EVER.”

They high five again.
I love how they're both like Barney Stinson here, obnoxious but hilarious ^^

I enjoyed the setting of this story as well, I was assuming it was sort of a magical world crossover halfway through but they seem pretty regular aside from the magic brew, but still the love potion aspect did not seem out of place? I just really enjoyed it, rec'ing! <3

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itachibana13 February 12 2012, 02:44:24 UTC
afhkjf aw, tell them thank you so much for the rec! and thank you so much!

are they really? i love barney ;__; despite the fact i've never actually watched how i met your mother.

oh, thank you! i was wondering how the setting would be received. i was worried people might think it's hp verse. thank you so much again! ♥

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fazings February 12 2012, 05:35:50 UTC
i really enjoyed this-it was so cute and just warmed my little heart :')!

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itachibana13 February 13 2012, 20:52:28 UTC
aw, thank you so much!

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