you keep me wide awake and waiting for the sun
you keep me wide awake and waiting for the sun
jonghyun/onew
5691 words; r
( Jonghyun inhales, eyes widening as the scent of blood fills his nostrils. )
jonghyun/onew
5691 words; r
( Jonghyun inhales, eyes widening as the scent of blood fills his nostrils. )
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AND I LOVE VAMPIRES AND VAMPIRE FIC AND JJONG VAMPIRE AND SOBBING ♥
(will just quote random stuff at you that I liked ESPECIALLY IN A SPECIAL OVERLY WAY)
Three weeks and twenty seven victims later, he finds himself in the heart of Seoul, making his way to one of the clubs.
I somehow love how you started the paragraph here <3
But no, it doesn’t, and Jonghyun makes sure to add that to his list of Things That Should Be Vampirey But Actually Aren’t.
I LOVE STUFF LIKE THAT EVEN THOUGH I CAN'T REALLY EXPLAIN WHY BUT I LOVE IT SO YAY n_____n
“This sounds like Twilight 2.0.,” Krystal deadpans. “You have a really lame life.
I LOVE ALL THE TWILIGHT SHIT YOU COME UP WITH DURING THE FIC SOBBING AND I LOVE KRYSTAL EVEN THOUGH I DON'T EVEN KNOW HER OUTSIDE THE FIC LOL ;^;
AND OMG LAME LIFE. HARD LIFE. POOR JJONG.
“I have no reflection ( ... )
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sobs all of this quotes oh my god ;____; i love it all ;____; cuddles it
i would have liked to keep onew human, but jonghyun seems to strike me as a really impulsive person, with his heart ruling over his brain, so i assumed he would probably be someone to fall to the temptation. ):
(cries i wrote a little more of it the other day ;___; )
thank you so much ;___;
cries! i couldn't find the download on that site you gave me ):
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oh onew lmao awkward child!! also what is his life ): he thinks his best friend is dead, but actually he's not because he's a vampire now, and then they have sexy tiemz and then JONGHYUN BITES ONEW waylt Jjong ): control yourself ): does cesar millan need to be called in |:
“Well,” Krystal smiles. “Jessica and I ate Italian food, so I just had garlic bread. Want to smell my breath?”
this is my favorite
why so cool, krystal. she is such a bamf man, mocking a vampire like it's nbd
i like this entire thing. and your writing ♥♥ ):
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ikr onew is such an awkward baby ): SOBS STATED LIKE THAT HIS LIFE IS SO HARD ): LOLOMG cesar millan crying
krystal is my hero sobs IKR only she would be like o vampire haithar
khfadkjlfh thank you so much ;____;!!!
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i was just waiting for the perfect moment to read this fic, since i knew i would love it regardless, but i just kept on getting distracted ;__; but now that i've read it, kalhglkahd.
everything was perfect, and gaah jonghyun as a vampire, spending his nights in bookstores, but managing to be bad arse either way by killing his victims like a bamf vampire. then jinki and jonghyun being completely light footed around each other, even though they just both want to be together, and ;___; jinki asking krystal all those questions was just too cute.
also, is this joonew i spot? why are you so amazing, omg.
They fall down onto the floor in a giant heap together, and Jinki’s cheeks burn in embarrassment as he hears Jonghyun laughing next to him, breathless and disheveled. He takes in the view of a thoroughly debauched Jonghyun, with his hair mussed and lips parted, swollen and bright red. He looks absolutely beautiful, stunning, even.lol, i tried to make myself only quote the first sentence, but i loved the entire thing just as ( ... )
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thank you so much ;____;!!
i love joonew they are such bffs ):
thank you so much! ;__;!!
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BUT! For some strange reason, I like it! :O Maybe it's because it's oh-so-precious Jongyu which not enough authors write about, or maybe it's how bloody awesome your characterisation of Jonghyun is. While I am trying to ignore the fact that Jonghyun's vampire side (sort of) is reminiscent of Edward, but good lord. His cheekiness and that frustration? Pretty darn good. :D And it's a plus that you have Krystal here! Perfect characterisation of her. (No prizes for guessing who's my favourite member. xD)
I am, however, a teensy weensy bit (like 0.00001%?) disappointed at the fact that Jinki's trust in Jonghyun is sort of shattered because Jonghyun couldn't control himself. As much as I know how gorgeous Jinki is, but ... Meh. All the better if Jonghyun manages to control. But I do feel that this gives a great start to a sequel! Cheeky yet gentle Jonghyun and robotic yet inexperienced Jinki would be a joy to read! <3
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oh, thank you! LMAO oh god is he really that reminiscent of edward? eep ;__; oh my god i love krystal so much it's ridiculous SHE IS JUST SO COOL TO ME.
yes ): jonghyun seems rather impulsive to me though, so i figured at one point or another he might break. sobbing a sequel ;___; idk if i'd ever do that tbh
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i like this!! very much. jonghyun getting it, coaxing jinki with little kisses, i'm such a chump for the way he's always going for it but also curbing his impulses and then just kind of losing himself in the end. which brings me to, turning jinki was a little unexpected but in hindsight it's sort of... well what else was there to do lol. (basically, wow, look at these two now and forever engaging in duo vampire adventures!! 'one unlucky soul' as in shared by jongyu(?) because uhhh good.) look at everything! krystal will need a damn holiday.
also my dick was never insecure, come at it ಠ⌣ಠ
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thank you! well idk, i mean i was trying to go by the picture as much as possible, and there wasn't much left onew to do except for die/turn into a vampire. krystal is going to buy a private island or something one day.
u leddy 4 dis?
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