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JONGHYUN'S LIFE IS SO HARD dongbangsuju20 September 2 2011, 22:49:44 UTC
you know my otp is jongkey and I'm not really fond of jongyu but after reading fics like these somehow I like it ;^; or can at least picture it....... in fics only /shot

AND I LOVE VAMPIRES AND VAMPIRE FIC AND JJONG VAMPIRE AND SOBBING ♥

(will just quote random stuff at you that I liked ESPECIALLY IN A SPECIAL OVERLY WAY)

Three weeks and twenty seven victims later, he finds himself in the heart of Seoul, making his way to one of the clubs.

I somehow love how you started the paragraph here <3

But no, it doesn’t, and Jonghyun makes sure to add that to his list of Things That Should Be Vampirey But Actually Aren’t.

I LOVE STUFF LIKE THAT EVEN THOUGH I CAN'T REALLY EXPLAIN WHY BUT I LOVE IT SO YAY n_____n

“This sounds like Twilight 2.0.,” Krystal deadpans. “You have a really lame life.

I LOVE ALL THE TWILIGHT SHIT YOU COME UP WITH DURING THE FIC SOBBING AND I LOVE KRYSTAL EVEN THOUGH I DON'T EVEN KNOW HER OUTSIDE THE FIC LOL ;^;

AND OMG LAME LIFE. HARD LIFE. POOR JJONG.

“I have no reflection?”

“Must be tragic for you.”

“Incredibly tragic.”

TRAGIC TRAGIC SAD LIFE JJONG HAS THERE SOBBING. HE CAN'T EVEN LOOK AT HIS OWN DUMB FACE OMG

“No!” Jinki says, a little louder than normal. Krystal and Jonghyun exchange glances.

LOL SO CUTE SOBBING.

Jinki’s hand at his back is warm and it burns a hole where it’s rested, the scent of Jinki right there clouding his senses. He can feel his canines molding themselves into fangs and suddenly everything stops.

wow I really liked the evolution of this sentence/paragraph. how you described the scent and how it floods jjong and changes him and then the sudden stop at the end. **

“I can’t stand the sunlight, I hate crosses, I have an awful desire to drink your blood, but at the same time I really, really like you and I don’t want to hurt you, so I’m going to leave, and hopefully we won’t meet again.”

CRIES I LOVE HOW HE SAYS ALL THIS WHILE RUSHING OUT OMG BEST CONFESSION OVER LOL ;^;
YOUR LIFE IS SO HARD JJONG /PETS

Because you’re the rich parasite who doesn’t need to spend money on food.

lmao i love how krystal calls him parasite wtf

Krystal’s life has more or less gotten much harder than it was before.

CRIES SAHJDHFHG

“It’s not supposed to work this way!” he whines to Krystal. “Shouldn’t I be the one saying no, and him trying to jump me?”

CRIES WAYLT JJONG WHY IS YOUR LIFE SO HARD AND WHY IS JINKI NOT JUMPING YOU???!?!?

He takes in the view of a thoroughly debauched Jonghyun, with his hair mussed and lips parted, swollen and bright red. He looks absolutely beautiful, stunning, even.

CRIES (idec about repeating it okay >:) SOBBING VAMPIRE JJONG IS SO BEAUTIFUL. JJONG IS SO BEAUTIFUL.

He turns to face Jonghyun almost robotically and says, “I’m hungry.”

It's actually kind of sad at first ;^; would be so nice to have innocent human jinki and vampire jjong

BUT NOW WE HAVE INNOCENT CLUMSY VAMPIRE JINKI AND VAMPIRE JJONG SOBBING
SO YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE ABOUT THEIR 'AFTER-LIFE' TOGETHER n________n

(BUT NOT BEFORE YOU WRITE ME MY JONGKEY FICS /STARES)

SO THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL AND I LOVE IT SOBBING
(and I love the fact that they just like each other since school and idk.. it's nice to not have the 'does he like me or not?' and 'how do I confess and what if he doesn't like me' part SO YAY ♥)

NOW GO AND WRITE MY JONGKEY FICS KEKE


(or first watch the anime AND THEN YOU CAN WRITE ME FIC TO THE ANIME OMG YES \O/)

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Re: JONGHYUN'S LIFE IS SO HARD itachibana13 September 3 2011, 18:45:08 UTC
OH MY GOD THIS COMMENT IS SO BIG SOBS I DON'T KNOW HOW TO RESPOND TO ALL OF THIS

sobs all of this quotes oh my god ;____; i love it all ;____; cuddles it

i would have liked to keep onew human, but jonghyun seems to strike me as a really impulsive person, with his heart ruling over his brain, so i assumed he would probably be someone to fall to the temptation. ):

(cries i wrote a little more of it the other day ;___; )

thank you so much ;___;

cries! i couldn't find the download on that site you gave me ):

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