Comments | selubration: #314: And the name was lost in the night

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#314: And the name was lost in the night

Aug 21, 2016 08:52

From: cathe0614

Title: And the name was lost in the night
Rating: G
Word Count: 3,900
Summary: After a chance encounter with Sehun, Luhan slowly falls in love but was ultimately unprepared for what was to happen to them.
Warning/s: None

( “He is the pencil sketch to the paper white monotony of my life: a vandal roughing through its immaculate course. Though somehow, the way it feels-as each impulsive stroke of the smooth graphite head skates on the virgin canvass to leave its silken dust-is such an obsessively, maddeningly satisfying experience that I cannot help but be addicted to it. So utterly perverse and yet I couldn’t help but hope, in secret, that when he looks at me, he sees the same.” )

round 5, rating: g, 2016, fic, length: under 5k

Comments 8

anonymous August 21 2016, 15:58:20 UTC

Wanting someone you can't have, and seeing that someone happy with someone else... I can imagine how painful of an experience it must feel like... Unrequited love is awful.
I want to imagine they're still friends though.
Thank you for this fic.

anonymous August 22 2016, 00:10:25 UTC

This was really beautiful! Sad it ended that way... I like how everything you wrote was just captivating and realistic, it really had drawn me in. I understand how Luhan felt, and ugh, it hurts. Thank you for writing this fic, hope I'll get to read other of your works too!

xxhna August 25 2016, 14:32:19 UTC

this is so painful. i think i'm physically hurting for luhan.

potatochin August 25 2016, 16:04:34 UTC

The moment I read the very first sentence, I knew I was hooked. I fell in love with your writing and your words, kind of like Luhan here with Sehun. I love how you described everything and I love how it ended because, call me a masochist, but when a story has that angsty vibe from the very beginning, especially a hunhan one, I want it to end the same way it started. So yes, I really love it and enjoyed every moment of heartache and pain, albeit sweet and short. Thank you so much for this! Sending you lots of love <3

clubchicken August 27 2016, 18:51:33 UTC

from the beginning of this fic i alrdy felt like it wouldnt end happily and its proven to be true as the story progressed ;A; im ~kind~ of familiar with this feeling of a one-sided love of pretending to be ok when the one u like/love is starting to like/love somebody else. u captured that feeling here hehe so hehe thank u for writing this!!