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selkie_queen

The Ultimate Threat

Jun 20, 2010 05:10

( The Ultimate Threat )

original fiction, future fiction, digger, sci-fi

Comments 5

Your BF edit! keppiehed June 21 2010, 01:53:42 UTC

Hello! I'm one of your editors this week ( ... )

Your BF edit! part two! keppiehed June 21 2010, 01:54:10 UTC

-The screams rang through the air[,] and when the children approached the hungry mind[,] they dropped to the ground ( ... )

Re: Your BF edit! part two! selkie_queen June 22 2010, 23:28:14 UTC

Thank you for taking the time to edit, I write very long pieces and I always feel bad for the people who draw me to edit for. I appreciate your time.

Digger is a strange character. She's devoid of guilt and common emotions, I think she's really my first attempt to write a complete sociopath.

Re: Your BF edit! part two! keppiehed June 22 2010, 23:38:33 UTC

O, don't feel bad at all. It was a pleasure, and I am glad I could be of help!

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selkie_queen June 22 2010, 23:29:23 UTC

Thanks. Really when I wrote my first Digger piece I didn't have a back story for her. This week just seemed like the perfect chance to deliever it.