Have You Seen This Man? - Chapter 2

[sejitsu]

Title: Have You Seen This Man? - Chapter 2
Rating: T
Genre: Romance/Humor
Disclaimer: Characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto. Writing belongs to me.
Notes: I am so incredibly sorry that it took this long to put up, everyone! My life has been super hectic lately, and the month just flew by. I don't plan on being this slow with updates, really. This

Comments

[unjaundiced]

*clutches you* WAAAAHHHHHH I'm getting cavities!!!! and stitches

Kakashi and Iruka are so transparent. I love it. XDDD Sneaky, sneaky Pakkun... I'm looking forward to this date as if I was actually going on it too! ... In a way I am... XDDD *stalker*

You have a couple grammar fixes that need to be done though. :]

"I'm not doing it," [he] muttered to no one in particular,"

"One [On] one level, he really, really didn't want to know"

"The Copy Nin, of all people, quite literally running into innocent [people?]"

[sejitsu]

I assume I'm doing something right? *clutches back*

Yes, they are so transparent. I can't write them ninja-y enough, alas. XD Oh, Pakkun. (I really love writing him. And Anko. So much fun.) I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it! I hope the date scene doesn't disappoint.

And thank you for catching these! I copied it from my FF.net version, which seems to have eaten the original document... *baffled* Two out of three of these mistakes didn't exist before I uploaded it to FF.net... So now I'm really confused... o_O But I'm glad that you caught them! Thank you thank you! ^_^ *gives cookie* And for your lovely review as well!

[unjaundiced]

My tummy hurts from laughing. XDDD

They don't have to be ninja-y when they're goofily awesome. I'm sure Kakashi's paranoia is a jounin level response anyways. I foresee Anko and Genma in cahoots in the future.

FFn eats anything you upload to it. That's how it stays alive. Someone should offer it sacrifices every few months to appease it haha

[sejitsu]

XD Thanks!

Anko and Genma just make a great team. XD A frightening one, but still.

I wasn't aware of this before, but I'll have to keep it in mind. XD *laugh* Oh yes, sacrifices. Hmmmmm.

[cactus_cat]

*grin* This is great, I can't wait to read more! Keep it up! :D

[sejitsu]

Yay! I'm so happy to hear that. ^_^ Thank you, and I'm glad you're enjoying it!

[larakaka]

Yay Update!! ^^

Those two are so sweet, and Pakkun...you got to love the pup ^^
I´m looking forward to the next chapter (and their date XD)
Great job!

[sejitsu]

Pakkun is just as devious as either of them... XD I write him as the better ninja, incidentally. *laughs*

I'm really glad you enjoyed this~! ^_^ I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint, and I get it out much quicker than this one. ^^;

Thanks for the lovely review!

[otherblood]

Shaping to be funny witty and cute. Looking forward to more!

[sejitsu]

*grin* Thank you! I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying it! ^_^

[pigeonina]

Love it! I still suspect iruka!!!!

[sejitsu]

I love your icon! XD

I'm soooo flattered that you're enjoying this! ^_^ *blush!*

With Iruka being so transparent, I can't believe Kakashi hasn't become suspicious yet... But, they've both had a pretty crazy day so far. I hope the future chapters don't disappoint! Thanks for your review! :)