[Akame] Addiction

Sep 07, 2010 00:34

Title: Addiction
Author: seiyoku
Rating: R
Genre: angsty retrospective slutty ficlet
Warnings: Drug references, sexual references, swearing
Pairings: Akame
Disclaimers: Hell used to belong to Satan; and then Kat-tun took over.
Authors notes: Weee! They are rockstars! Let's give 'em booze and drugs cause it makes for great fanfic plot bunnies ( Read more... )

pairing: kamenashi/akanishi, fandom: kat-tun, fic: oneshot

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deeacrazyme September 6 2010, 19:36:11 UTC
haha.. totally agreeing with you. the analogy is great and the way you presented the night life made me feel for a moment i was there. then the night life goes to the press conference and i can feel even more anxiety because of the calm it was supposed to be filled with.
i don't know much about tokyo's night life but i know about night and this makes me miss it.
i agree..1582 is a damn good song to listen to when writing something. i still haven't build up the courage to put down what i can imagine while listening to it
the fic was great. loved it. thanks for sharing

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seiyoku September 7 2010, 01:52:47 UTC
There was something so sinister about that press conference, wasn't there? When I was writing it, I felt how Kame was feeling and I just wanted to piss bolt out the door and run back to the neon glow of the streets and night. Quite awkward when you actually have to write the damn thing.
Ah, Tokyo nightlife is amazing!!! It is fucking crazy and mind blowing. Although, having said that, Osaka party nights are better.
1582 owns theme songs now! It is great. And ohh, I would love to see your take on the inspiration that comes with those haunting lyrics and odd as all hell melody.
Thank you for your thoughts and I am glad that you enjoyed it!

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shiroakuma September 6 2010, 21:08:31 UTC
Wow, real intense and well composed. I started out confused but caught up with the meaning soon enough =)) with the dark theme and referencing between two different situations, It was nicely written.
Thnx for sharing, it was fun -n mouth watering- to read!

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seiyoku September 7 2010, 01:40:10 UTC
Thank you! Sorry about the confusing beginning, but I think it is more awesome that way. I like things like that where you have no clue what is going on; is he smashed; fucked off his face; sober; coming down; hallucinating; is the bathroom in a club; it is in his house...? And then it all smashes together in same way and (hopefully) makes sense.

It is kinda like being slapped in the face with a dead fish.

Glad you enjoyed and found it mouth watering!

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zurui_koi September 6 2010, 22:45:43 UTC
Ahhhh, I read it while listening to 1582 on repeat cause I remembered that's what you had written to and man, so fitting. 'I'm being controlled all the way to my fingertips' ~ *twitch*. Really left me thinking 'I know exactly how he feels' but I'm not quite sure what I was referring to, it was just written so well I thought I knew maybe?

Oh! And the Womb disco ball, Kame in the bathroom, and THIS - "Nights blurred into one, the lines of reality, sobriety and horrible come downs unable to define. Desire and stolen moments. The sound of zippers and heavy panting. Rough and fast, groans aggravated and hands bruising. Shouted commands and thrown glasses, smashed bars and police cars and confrontations in the newspapers afterwards; taxis home and the glowing lights of the city burning like the hell-fire in his blood."

So well done ♥ thankyou so much, you've made this song even more strangely special.

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By the time I am done with this fandom, it is going to be so diiirrrrty! seiyoku September 7 2010, 01:48:52 UTC
Yes to the song! My god; I just had music on shuffle and was about half way through the fic and 1582 came on and I just went YES! Theme song! But yes, the themes of control, the eyes being reflective, dreaming of days with you, sinking. It was just so perfect. I know what you mean about feeling the same way too. You know when you get so into something that you kinda breathe it; this entire thing just blurted out of my head in an afternoon and something about it felt like I was writing from experience. Not that I can pinpoint anything though, so god knows where it all came from. Maybe it is experience and I was just too off my face to actually remember ( ... )

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starg8fan_liz September 7 2010, 00:29:00 UTC
perfect metaphor XD really great fic <3 looove the end

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seiyoku September 7 2010, 01:36:53 UTC
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed

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cutebambi September 7 2010, 08:04:08 UTC
Your fic is excellent, very good writing. May I add you as friend dear ?

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seiyoku September 7 2010, 12:02:40 UTC
Thank you. Glad you liked.
And of course you can. Have added you back.

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