Comments | seekertoseeker: (long one-shot) FIC: Turnabout 3/3 [NC-17; HP/DM, RW/DM]

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(long one-shot) FIC: Turnabout 3/3 [NC-17; HP/DM, RW/DM]

Feb 15, 2005 16:48

Title: Turnabout (3/3)
Author: Hijja (kennahijja@yahoo.com)
Rating: NC-17; blackmail, ambiguous consent, BDSM themes
Pairing(s): HP/DM, RW/DM
Summary: We'll do nothing he hasn't done to us. And it'll still be far less than he deserves.

One-shot, cut into three parts to enable posting.
( Part 3 )

Comments 10

gossymer July 12 2005, 15:48:42 UTC

I kinda read this backwards- since hatesex is hardly ever a forray of mie- in fact it kind of squicked me out. But I found your characterization rather interesting ( ... )

kennahijja July 12 2005, 16:09:18 UTC

Oh, thank you so very much for the detailed feedback, especially for the comments on Ron. For me, he felt exactly like the 'Ron who could be' - older, and more mature. To me, Harry was more vindictive, at least in attitude if not in actions. Ron... I wouldn't call him 'Dark' - he has that kind of attitue in the books, and here he gets to live it out instead of being stopped by Hermione or Harry... And he's far more careful than he *could* be :).

To an extent Ron and Harry do want to go back to before- but is tha teven possible? Turnabout- its made them into hypocrites hasn't it? THe darker side of that righteous Gryffindor rage, which tends to be so self serving.
Exactly! I don't think it's possible, and yes, they're exposed as hypocrites - no better than James/Sirius, probably worse when they feel in the right. But more human than Gryffindor icons of virtue, too :).

I'm so glad this worked for you even if it's not your favourite theme - but hatesex is the only way I can get H/D or R/D to work ;).

suga_sweetie November 14 2005, 21:40:53 UTC

Re: some comments, I'd love to see a sequel as well. I'm so H/D (which explains what I'm doing here) but really, this turned very R/D, and not in an unpleasant way, either. I like the fact that while Harry was left out a touch, we saw everything from his POV - it made the story flow better. Ick, Malfoy in his true nasty, brutish form...I guess we fangirls needed to face the truth sometime, eh?

In other words: I love you, please marry me? ♥

kennahijja November 14 2005, 21:50:56 UTC

Heh, that was my first marriage proposal for fanfic, ever! *smooches*
It *was* intended as mostly H/D, but I never love my Ron more than when he just walks into something and takes over :). And yes, I love my nastybastard!Malfoy :).
Glad you liked it - thanks so much for the lovely comment!

suga_sweetie November 15 2005, 12:44:00 UTC

Only your *first* marriage propsal? :o How can that be? And here I was, counting on being part of this entire harem of fangirls/boys...Heh.

My comment didn't make much sense, did it? I guess I was still slightly incoherent from that beautiful piece of work up there. ♥ more!

(Ron has such a potential Dark streak. *cough* And not just because it might lead to really hot smut.)