Comments | see_the_horizon: James/Elizabeth: "These Last Moments" *complete*

hintofawhisper in see_the_horizon

James/Elizabeth: "These Last Moments" complete

Aug 20, 2007 16:03

I basically decided to continue this on a whim. When I first wrote "These Last Moments" I had only intended it to be a one-shot, but I've had some people ask me to add one more chapter, focusing specifically on Elizabeth's son at the end of AWE, and how from reading this fic, I should make the boy not be Will's. So, after thinking hard about it, I ( Read more... )

james norrington, norribeth, fanfiction, rating: teen, pirates of the caribbean, elizabeth swann

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ericadawn16 August 20 2007, 22:38:43 UTC

Aww, I loved it. I had thought of doing the same thing because there are about twenty-four hours of James and Elizabeth on The Flying Dutchman that are unaccounted for and since Elizabeth has brown eyes, their child would probably have them, too, just like the boy in the end so I'm not entirely convinced he's James...

But, I'm not sure how I'd be able to top this.

hintofawhisper August 20 2007, 22:45:22 UTC

since Elizabeth has brown eyes, their child would probably have them, too,

Yeah, see, when I was writing this I thought about that, how it's more likely for a boy to have his mother's eyes... but I put that aside for this fic, because James' eyes are just too beautiful and I wanted them to be passed on to someone... XD I'm sure you can understand that. ;D

Thank you, though! :D I'm glad you liked this.

ericadawn16 August 20 2007, 22:58:19 UTC

Well, I did do that in a fic, too.
I mainly brought it up to illustrate my point that Young William Turner might not be William's at all. It could very well be the situation that you suggest or perhaps she did go to the brig where we find her when James lets them out, but in between she visited James in his quarters.

hintofawhisper August 21 2007, 00:05:13 UTC

Well, I did do that in a fic, too.
Really? :) I'd like to read it; can you give me the link?

Oh, I know what you meant; I didn't take your comment as criticism or anything. :)I do see your point, and even though in the film it is heavily implied that the boy is Will's, I would've loved the idea of her visiting James in his quarters to be true. ;D

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lizzie_sparrow August 20 2007, 23:09:33 UTC

Oh my god!

I was so close to tears, that was amazing. Great job. <3

hintofawhisper August 21 2007, 00:06:45 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked the fic.

I'm now in love with your icon, btw. ;)

lizzie_sparrow August 21 2007, 00:10:02 UTC

Aw, thank you.

You can use it if you'd like. Just credit. =]

hintofawhisper August 21 2007, 00:34:28 UTC

Thanks, I think I will. And I'll be sure to credit. :)

flyingpigs_live August 21 2007, 00:31:22 UTC

Aww. Just...awww. :)

hintofawhisper August 21 2007, 00:35:26 UTC

xD Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

rosemerry August 21 2007, 00:40:58 UTC

oh! I loved it! :)

hintofawhisper August 21 2007, 00:52:08 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it. :)

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hintofawhisper July 30 2008, 01:48:22 UTC

Aww, thank you! :D Your comment really made me happy. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.

The whole thing about her son was so exciting that I just had to write this. It made me feel better, considering the boy is indeed Will's in canon, as seen at the end of AWE. ;D

Oh, you did read the first part, right? It's MUCH better if you read that one too. :)

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hintofawhisper July 30 2008, 02:38:33 UTC

:D

Oh, good. And thank you. :)
Wow, I really need to stop making my fics so bittersweet, haha. xD