Some Poetry

[sedenko]

Here is a bit of poetry I just wrote. Let me know what you think.

Crux

Blue paths out to the horizons
in rays
of melancholy,
seen by woman and her babe.

Sandals slap each offended stone.
Green walk
for both,
verdant the eyes.

I have remembered nothing.
Will I.
Will you
doctor, tell me that story a third time?
Hanging

Comments

[kjersten]

honestly, it is a really cool poem... but dead babies? :S ah! the color stuff is cool tho.

[sedenko]

Thank you very much. It went over pretty well in class.

[star9186]

wow, if that was the summary of your night, your night was rather depressing but very well written.

[afmgreentea]

ditto. i hope this doesn't have to do with that "Feed starving children to Starving Children" thing you and alex have going...

but, really, it's very good.

[sedenko]

If I told you all to look for as much religious symbology as possible, would it read differently?

[sedenko]

Also, a fellow in my class wrote a poem about V for Vendetta, it was more than a little amusing.

[sedenko]

Symbology is a perfectly cromulent word.