Some Poetry

[sedenko]

Here is a bit of poetry I just wrote. Let me know what you think.

Crux

Blue paths out to the horizons
in rays
of melancholy,
seen by woman and her babe.

Sandals slap each offended stone.
Green walk
for both,
verdant the eyes.

I have remembered nothing.
Will I.
Will you
doctor, tell me that story a third time?
Hanging

Comments

[sedenko]

If I told you all to look for as much religious symbology as possible, would it read differently?

[sedenko]

Also, a fellow in my class wrote a poem about V for Vendetta, it was more than a little amusing.

[sedenko]

Symbology is a perfectly cromulent word.

[afmgreentea]

cromulent. *tee hee*

[kjersten]

aha! i think i get it :). cool. did anyone in your class get it?